| "Loneliness" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: AngelNinja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic. This is one of the romantic fanworks I have ever read. Please write a sequel to this .I would appreciate it very much if Van and Fiona will have a baby boy or ,better yet,give their son an older twin sister should you make a sequel to this. The only thing that got me unsatisfied was that you didn't make this a Van x Fiona hentai fanfic. But everything else is very excellent. Arigato Gozai Mazu! :D
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Reviewed By: fan On: March 24, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTUNIE WITH THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Spiral Sniper On: February 14, 2003 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! I love the whole thing, I'm all for it! The chaacters are a little off-beat though. Van didn't talk like Van. Just a few more adjustments and it could be even better! Hope you kep writing about Van+Fiona! |
Reviewed By: Wraith On: January 29, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make other van&fiona fics |
