| "Can she?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2010 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good for your first lemon. You may want to fix your spelling and grammar. And Mel....was OOC in the second chapter. I really can't see her yelling YE! Fuck me!! Lol! It just really isn't in her to talk like that. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Midnight Star On: April 13, 2003 19:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad for a first lemon. That's better than I can do. I really did like the story. Please feel free to read and review my stories. They are here in Media Miner. |
Reviewed By: blcrane52 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read plenty of Gene/Mel fanfictions and have seen the best of them and the worst of them. Besides the bad spelling, I realy enjoyed this fic. (The spelling though bad, really didn't bother me that much though.) I'll be looking forward to future stories from you. Keep up the good work! |
