| "There's No Love Deeper Than a Brother's" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: perception On: May 22, 2005 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so fucking cute!
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Reviewed By: Terra (lissete) On: April 27, 2004 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was great!
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Reviewed By: Yaoi Ashes On: March 09, 2004 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm, I thought it was delicious! Exactly what I was in the mood for--hot, sweaty sex! Hope you write more great fics!
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Reviewed By: tiza On: February 25, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE Vash/Knives fics, and there so hard to find. Yours was so freeking GOOD! If you write more, I'll give you a cookie ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Kitty-Chan On: January 24, 2004 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... there was too much 'adjective plant did this' and 'adjective plant did that'. @_@ It's nice to remind us that they're plants once or twice. But honestly... There's such a thing as moderation.
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Reviewed By: Authoress K. C. [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I had to read it again!!!!! *hands you a card* You are now a member of the Knives Is Not A Bastard Club. Welcome and you are the second member. First being ME! Ja! Love lemons... Must find more.... Knives! |
Reviewed By: Ninjakamon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool cool. lila waste wanji mazaskaskan
cool cool. really good For your first time |
Reviewed By: MoRbLaDe On: May 13, 2003 01:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I do not understand this thing with the yaoi, there is too much of it... seems depravity has an outlet is M/M fan fics... *shrugs* honestly I don't know anything of the matter, just that there seems to be too much yaoi. BAH! Enjoy yourselves regardless, I stick with what works ^,^ c^^m M/W |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 14:55 CST
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It was fab!!(Why must I start all my reviews this way...) The only probs I saw, were a few misspelled words, but that happens!! *winks*
It was well written for your first lemon, and I hope to see more!!
Ja now!!
Katmon =^.^={AKA Okusama KK} |
Reviewed By: Authoress K. C. [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 11:18 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O!!! *hopples around* SQUEE SQUEE SQUEE!!!! *stops hoppleing and plinks herself down, all out of breath and happy like* Geeze... All thought processes ground to a SCREECHING halt right there.... Muse Kazier.... Take over.... Must drool.... Knives....
Muse Kaiser: *flutteres around K. C.'s head annoyingly* The Misstress would like to appologize first off, she got a bit excited. Knives is one of her favorites, so, she has now become permanantly affixed to the computer once more. She enjoyed it very much and-
*swats the hovering annoyance* Shaddap. I don't appologize, but I was excited. KNIVES!!! *pops out her plushie she made to look very authentic, even with a tag* I sew a lot. I REALLY liked this, WRITE MORE!!!! MORE!!!!!! *hands you her banner* ~HAPPY YAOI!~
JA NE!!!!!!!,
Authoress K. C. =^.^= *Mew!* |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 08:00 CST
Comment/Review:
That was really good for your first lemon.
Keep working. You've got a lot of potential.
Don't be afraid of using their names however: eye color isn't the only thing that defines a person, and you relied very heavily on that in this fic. It gets a little repetitive, and distracts a little from the writing.
Overall, you did very well, though. |
Reviewed By: cathowl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cathowl: Thanks for the milk! *Completely ignores everything to lap at the bowl of milk*
Scott: ...Oi... Well, nice lemon. *Grin* really good for your first lemon! My first lemon hasn't even made it online. It sits, rotting on my harddrive. Oi... It was bad.
Cathowl: Why do you keep saying 'oi', Scott?
Scott: Dunno. I have said it a lot today, haven't I? Anyway, I'm glad you wrote this! Thanks! *Revels in the nice purdy lemon* This'll last me a little bit, maybe until I've ssen enough Trigun to write my own Trigun shounen-ai! Keep working on your fic. I'll be sure to review the next chapter you put up. Oi... It's 11:30 pm... Need sleep... School tomorrow... See ya!
Cathowl: Hmn?
Scott: The lemon is already over Cathowl. You chose to have your milk for your orgasmic enjoyment instead.
Cathowl: *Sputters* I don't like milk that much! Stupid human...
Scott: Ah, tell it to Knives. *Waves at Chibi Gemi* Thanks for the lemon! I gotta go!
Cathowl: ...Bye, sorry I didn't get a chance to read it.
Scott: Later. |
