Reviewed By: Burning Shaedows On: January 22, 2003 04:42 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: hm... interesting. I like this fic, I really do. and.. there is no Usagi!!!! YAY!!!!!!! ~_^' sorry, got a lil' carried away, too many Usagi centered fics *shudder*, I was starting to think they were taking over.
Yup, I like this fic so far, no doubt about that. But one thing, does Hotaru really smile and talk that much? She seems a bit... cocky, mainly at the end of the third chapter, afer her father dies and she goes into the kitchen and talks to/annoys Heero. Oh well, you're the author not me, the only thing I want is for you to add the fourth chapter sometime this year!
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