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"Tryst" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Nanshi  On: January 26, 2003 22:17 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I started and finished reading it today and it's GREAT!!
Can't wait for the next chapter...
but gotta say you preatty much rushed it when Hotaru and Heero started liking each other. From what i read they basically only had one conversation and Boom...they like each other and are making out. Anyway...
update...Update...UPDATE
 Reviewed By: Burning Shaedows  On: January 22, 2003 04:42 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
hm... interesting. I like this fic, I really do. and.. there is no Usagi!!!! YAY!!!!!!! ~_^' sorry, got a lil' carried away, too many Usagi centered fics *shudder*, I was starting to think they were taking over.
Yup, I like this fic so far, no doubt about that. But one thing, does Hotaru really smile and talk that much? She seems a bit... cocky, mainly at the end of the third chapter, afer her father dies and she goes into the kitchen and talks to/annoys Heero. Oh well, you're the author not me, the only thing I want is for you to add the fourth chapter sometime this year!

Shaedows

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