| "Chosen One" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: silverwindstarshinerune On: August 13, 2004 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good plot moving quite well and wonderfully thought out.I loved to read more of this its got me sitting on the edge of my seat wanting to know if they catch the bad guy's and if Dee will recover.I'll keep cheaking back to see if you do anymore on this store.you might want to consider writeing an oraginal story as well and not just a fan fic. I love it.I would love to read more on it. Silverwind starshine Rune
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Reviewed By: Gothic Rose On: December 30, 2003 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Akurei13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this, write more! |
Reviewed By: Jahan On: March 03, 2003 13:33 CST
Comment/Review:
It`s just too good. please contineu. |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
This chapter was very well-written and engrossing. I enjoyed it a lot. I loved the tenderness between Ryo and Dee. Nice to see Dee on the receiving end for a change. Looking forward to your next update. Thanks so much. |
Reviewed By: Tayaboroma On: February 13, 2003 08:13 CST
Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD. Oh may be one of the best Fake fics so far. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: Tri On: February 14, 2003 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
is Bikky gonna get kindapped?????????? whats going to happen??? |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 22:52 CST
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Don't stress out. Have faith in your subconscious. It knows all. Just move ahead and start work on the next chapter...all will become clear. Not all chapters have to be spine-tinglers. Some are just set-ups for the goods to follow. Take your time and relax. I am enjoying this. Update soon, please. |
Reviewed By: madamebutterfly1983 On: January 20, 2003 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a very good Fake fiction. It has its own plot and is not the typical fiction. Language is easy to understand and the characters are in character. |
Reviewed By: Diamond Dragon On: January 14, 2003 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cool!! What's wrong with Dee?? How will the case get solved?? Nice story! Please keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 14, 2003 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMMMMMMMaaaannnnnn,.....poor dee,...*sniff*...what's wrong with him???....does he contract some kind of a
flu or something??...a dangerous one??...Aids????...*shudders*....PPPPPleaaaaseeee don't kill him off,....*sob*...he's my fav character in FAKE,....*sniffles*...and ryo will surely shattered if he lost dee,...*sob*...it's nice to know that nearly everyone seems kinda shock to see dee falls sick,...and seems concern for him,....including "rose-sama" and bikky,...*grins*.....and it's nice to see ryo soo worried and caring towards dee,...i think it's time ryo shows some TLC towards dee,...intead of dee always doing it,....keep-up the good work kay,...till yer-next chapter,..JJJJJaaaaaa and GGGaaaannnnnnbbbaateeee-NNeeeeee!!^_~!! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 08, 2003 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWOOOAAAAAAHHHHHH,....*gasp*...that is ONEEEEEEE HEEELLLLLL of a first chapter,.........the scenes at the end is quite gruesome,...*grimace*...all those bodies of kids,....it's almost makes me puke just trying to imagine it,.....@.@
this is VEERRYYYYYY WEEEELLLLL DOOONEEEE,...i like it,.....*clap,clap*...continue soon please,.......i got a feeling that this is gona become one of my fav fake fics,......*grins*....keep-up the good work kay,....till yer-next chapter,...JAAAAAAA and GAAAANBBBATEEEEE-NEEEEE!!^_~!! |
Reviewed By: XZanayu On: January 07, 2003 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi KitsumeKyo.
XZanayu here. Nice first chapter!! I like it. Plese continue!!! |
