| "Just for one Touch" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: wassup? On: March 18, 2004 06:48 CST
Comment/Review:
wow, this is great! i want sequel! i want sequel! it'll b cool 2 noe konzen's take on all this..n wut happens after goku n homura r separated...this is juz too good a fic 2 b one-shot...sequel! sequel! sequel! =)
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Reviewed By: mnhmjy On: January 21, 2004 09:17 CST
Comment/Review:
come on! everybody1 shout "sequel"!!!!! i want one!
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Reviewed By: Mimisan On: October 09, 2003 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O PRETTY,PRETTY PLEASE!!!YOU HEARD VINCE,i want a sequel!!!
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Reviewed By: blahblahblah On: January 08, 2003 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story of Goku confessing his love to Konzen and being rejected thus making Goku run off into the arms of another has been done to the death. However, where your story differs is the person to whom Goku runs to! :) I have come across lots of stories where Goku runs into the arms of Kenren or Tenpou. Not Homura and especially not where you have a Homura who is honestly in love with Goku. I would really like to read more of this if you have, because hopefully we'll have a Homura-Goku fic then lol! Don't see it much anywhere neways. |
