| "Little Lion" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: neosildrake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Cannot say much about grammar and spelling, but I enjoyed the originality. I know I'm a little late for a review, but, well, better late than never. What also is good is that the story is finished! It's rare enough for good stories to get finished. However, I also think this story screams SEQUEL! But since you probably won't write one, given the fact that you didn't already and it's 2006 by now... well too bad. However, I really like this one, even with all the drama and angst. At least it has a happy end...
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Reviewed By: Frozenflarenotloggedoncausesheforgotherpassword On: June 30, 2005 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woah wait, there are only six reviews!? Geez that's messed up, it's good.. Poor leon :(
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Reviewed By: Kleptomaniac Can Opener [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 00:20 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a terrific story! I hope to see a sequel to this. I would very much like to see how things play out differently. The only real problems I saw were some spelling errors. >^_^< MEOW!
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Kill_all_flamers210 (not logged in) On: September 18, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!! i mean WHOA!! this is just plain good!! how did you come up with it??!!! i feel so bad for bombay though so sad.....yeah well great story i really like it
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Title: I love this story!!
Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color I love this story!!!! It's one of my favorites on FF.net and MM! I really hope you continue to write, and I hope you update long denied soon!!! ^_^ Ja! ~Akari
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Reviewed By: vak On: April 02, 2004 10:03 CST
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I think you did a good job on this, but i sort of got a weird feeling about it, no offense but you didn't really stay true to the story, especially that Leon's new dad was a cop, he was supposed to be in jail, and then he go Leon's mom "knocked up" when she visited him. I'm sorry if I seem to picky, I like your other work a lot, I think you would do really well writing your own original stories, if you haven't started already! :)
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Reviewed By: Cleodasia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My gods, you are an evil, evil writer! A wonderful writer, but you're playing with my emotions, dammit!!! *wails* This is gooooood....please do continue, I beg of you!! I want to see if what I think is going on is what is going on, and I want Leon's "father" to get what's coming to him! *pant pant* good luck, and good job... |
Reviewed By: PSOH fan On: January 14, 2003 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic ^^ itīs really interesting. The ending was really kawaii!!! ;_; you made me cry. |
