| "Coincidences and Second Chances" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: tmelange On: February 12, 2003 00:28 CST
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Wow. What a great continuation. I really enjoyed chapter 5a & b. This line was so sweet:
`Why didn't you tell me I liked you Aya?' Yohji proclaimed, gently feathering the lock of ruby hair across his nose. Aya looked up and met his colleague's deep jade eyes for the first time.
Kudos. |
Reviewed By: Isa-chan On: February 12, 2003 08:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a good story I can't wait for more! =^____^= |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 20:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Very sweet. Aya's reaction made me wince, but I can see how he'd jump to conclusions.
And the way Yohji's own feelings slowly dawned on him was great. I love the way he asked Aya about his childhood as a way of making what they have more than just physical. It wasn't just an empty question.
I could feel the tugs on my heart strings several times. Nicely done. |
Reviewed By: u know who On: February 13, 2003 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story!
Some great bits like if Yohji was bargaining with god..LOL
The part when Aya spilled out his feelings was just sweet.Can't wait till the next one.NEXT!! |
Reviewed By: Darya On: February 13, 2003 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's more then just good. It's wounderfull.
I can't waite for the rest of it!!! |
Reviewed By: psychosnaz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read your fic yesterday and just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying it immensely and can't wait to find out how the rest of the story unfolds! It's very refreshing and original and it's another YohjixAya so of course i love it!
Desperate to read more from you! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: aquamoon On: January 25, 2003 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yay! very interesting fic! sasha, is "neo-schuldich", right? well, i loves schu-youji pairing besides youji-aya.. soooo, with my favourite couples here.. with an very interesting beginning.. (2048?wow.. aya had grandson? wow..)i like this fic! Update ASAP, hehehheeeeee... ^_~ |
Reviewed By: tmelange On: January 23, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better and better. It is amazingly interesting. I particularly like that the story has some complexity: both Aya and Yohji are with other people, they don't get along, it's set in the future, the journal etc. There's a lot to explore. Keep up the great work and I hope to see the next chapter very soon. |
Reviewed By: sara_chan On: January 13, 2003 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Very interesting indeed.
It's something new and I like it.
Hope to see more soon |
Reviewed By: silvertoekee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow cool and original fic. hmm so what happens next? |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way this has started. The story within the story is provocative, especially since there are so many unanswered questions with what happened to Aya and Yohji (of Weiss).
I look forward to seeing what else your devious mind cooks up! |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 15:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. This is certainly an ambitious beginning. I like! Not just one Youji/Aya story, but two!!! But something had to have happened to the original/older set, 'cause Aya ended up getting married. I'm curious if Neo-Youji knows why he has a weakness for redheads. He said that he was close to his grandfather, so it's possible that he already knows. And, you opened chapter three with a comment about clones... is that significant? I must have more! |
Reviewed By: HarukaHiasobi On: January 08, 2003 14:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, I really liked this fic. Please continue soon!
But there is just one thing I didn't really understand. If Ran/Aya and Yohji are the reincarnates of their grandfathers, how can they be born while the other two were still alive? At least in Ran's case. His grandpa died when he was 5, right? Or maybe it's a whole ghost haunting thing^^;; |
Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. I love it. I really do. I can't wait to read more.
The idea of having their grandkids (I'm very curious to whom Yotan and Aya-kun married) finish the story they started is really different. I wonder what will happen when they finally figure it out.. or if they figure it out.
Keep up the good writing.
Oh, and my favorite pairing is YohjixAya too. XD |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 16:58 CST
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Ah, I see that "Omi" has made an appearance!
I loved the cliffhanger ending. I am torn between wanting to know what happens with the original couple and what happens with the grandsons of the original Weiß members. |
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