| "Coincidences and Second Chances" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 18:12 CDT
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ok so i know this fic is old (2003), but i see you are still around (2005)....so here's to hoping u finish/update this fic...pls....hmm hope that didnt sound too stalker like
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Reviewed By: Sara_chan On: March 17, 2003 08:59 CST
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This is one of my favorit fics. PLEASE don't suspend it. |
Reviewed By: u know who On: March 14, 2003 05:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Hey,I enjoyed your fic but are you at least gonna update soon? I've tried begging but now I think I'll try threatening you.Please update chapter 6 before writing something else....OR ELSE!!! :) |
Reviewed By: Blambul On: March 12, 2003 09:36 CST
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Hey I like No Love it!
It's nice to see something original for a chance. |
Reviewed By: Kona-kona On: March 10, 2003 11:07 CST
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com on. you've not up dated for an eternity and a half.
We love your fic .please contineu updating. |
Reviewed By: [enervate / serena] On: March 09, 2003 07:44 CST
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One word to describe it from START to the END : TERRIFIC! No,... I'm not exaggerating, but seriously I love this one even I am clueless on Weiss. And I am now addicted to this fic... don't ask why... I just don't know... I like the plot... I like the 5th chapters.... on the datuk Aya and Yohji... but now that the cucu Aya knows about his datuk's past.... what will happen between him and Tori a.k.a. cucuYojhi?? Hayaku update, ne? I wanna know what happen next.... |
Reviewed By: serena On: March 07, 2003 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally I finished almost all of the chapters.... yet to read 5a n 5b..... but overall,.... walaupun aku tak begitu kenal weiss kreuz lagi, tapi this fic rocks! really! as though as i dont really need a true comprehension of weiss to comprehend.... so its okay since i have yet to pester my pet bro 2 get it...... oh! i wanna read the 5th chapters now! can't wait.... jyaa! |
Reviewed By: suma On: March 03, 2003 13:49 CST
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Just GREAT. but it`s screaming for an update you know |
Reviewed By: java On: March 01, 2003 13:00 CST
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Please up date soon. I`ve been waiting an eternity for the rest of it. it`s so interesting. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 22:27 CST
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this is such an awesome story, it kept me up 2 hours later than i was planning on being conscious so go you! serves me right for scanning mediaminer rightbefore i want to go to bed... but still! 2 hours is pretty damn good. your story is great and i love the whole journal idea. and having schu's and brad's reincarnations as their lovers... nice touch ^_^ it's obvious the future aya and his lover's relationship is already falling appart, it'll be interesting to see how you choose to write this, and how much angst you decide to put in it, because there could be a little or a lot. question though... is the future straight (or at least thinks he is?)? cause that was an interesting reaction he had upon reading his granddad's first entry.
well, if you ever watn help with brainstorming or want a beta reader and allt hat spiff stuff, i'd be more than happy to. my email's onejoy1@pobox.com
Mara |
Reviewed By: Samereh On: February 25, 2003 12:29 CST
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Lovly,Lovly,Lovly! |
Reviewed By: u know who On: February 10, 2003 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a reallly nice fanfic.The writing is great ans well as the pace.But I can't wait for chapter 5.UPDATE PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Talyssa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 20:42 CST
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oh my god, chpt 5 was honestly the best touch of angst I've read in ages. Seriously. Someone mentioned the other day on one of the mls I'm on that they just don't make weiss fics like they used to. two years ago there was just an outpouring of unbelievably good fics, and now its a bare trickle, if that. You've given me hope for a new round of really good stuff. More soon I hope? |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 21:11 CST
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What a good chapter, angst that concluded with sweetness. I think it's great that Yoji wants a relationship with Aya and not just a quick screw. His bewilderment as to why Aya would feel that way about him was very sweet. |
Reviewed By: tmelange On: February 12, 2003 00:28 CST
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Wow. What a great continuation. I really enjoyed chapter 5a & b. This line was so sweet:
`Why didn't you tell me I liked you Aya?' Yohji proclaimed, gently feathering the lock of ruby hair across his nose. Aya looked up and met his colleague's deep jade eyes for the first time.
Kudos. |
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