| "The Battle of Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra On: October 25, 2003 14:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE FINISH!!!! *gets on knees and begs*
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Reviewed By: jade_scout On: October 09, 2003 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the best fanfic ever in the history of ever you are a true writer that was the best
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Reviewed By: the master942002 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
yami and Amari thats a good they should be peared up
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Reviewed By: lover of marick On: September 21, 2003 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like you story. Please write more. I think the parings should be YamixAmari TeaxYugi JoeyxMai and tristanx?. Please hurry up and write more.
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Reviewed By: Mi-Mi On: September 04, 2003 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic. Your Style of writing is really good. The plot is really creative. I enjoyed reading this alot. The pairings...Yami x Amari, Tea x Tristan, Joey x ?, and various others. I defiantly think that the main couple should be Yami and Amari. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should make it Joey and Amari, only because I think it'd be weird being with a guy that looks exactly like my brother... |
Reviewed By: Anyonomousteheheheheh^_^;; On: July 14, 2003 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously like this a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Especially the idea of a Sailor Universe. Please post up the next chapter soon. I just have to see it.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really liking your story so far. Please keep it up. I want more chappies. I want to know what happens. Are Yami and Amari in love? Please Please Please write more chappies. PPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZ |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 17:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mmm! Great chapter!!! You kept us waiting so long! |
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 23:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is the answer to uni's question:
u'll find of in the next chapter! Muahahahaha! |
Reviewed By: uni On: July 06, 2003 12:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
dieing here nead to know what happens. please
wright more. also who is attackingthe universe
kindom?
uni |
Reviewed By: Moomoo On: June 26, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a really good story. finish so i know what happens 2 Amari.plz |
Reviewed By: Lunar Moon Girl On: June 19, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was very cool i like the story just keep at it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sings along to th song* you know the song does kind o fit in yet it is kind of cnfusing in the end. the chapters could se a little bit more depth to them and your sentence structure could use a little work to make it more instering to read. I am nottring to bad mouth you I am only trying to help. the story i so confusing the way its typed |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2003 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! I want more! |
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