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| "The Becoming" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Cthulhu On: April 02, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, That's a very good fic.
I can't wait to see what happened with Guillmon, Terriermon and Renamon while the tamers were away.
I like the hints of a Takato/Ruki relationship, that's how it was intended but surprisingly, few write fanfics about it.
And I am the only one on this universe that thinks a Guillmon/Renamon pairing would be cute? | Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: March 17, 2003 23:33 CST
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Please write chapter 4 of this fic very quickly! | Reviewed By: Wyld Stallyns [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, not bad at all. One problem with this fic is the left and right thing. It's hard to read the fic that way. I have to copy and paste this fic onto my notepad file to have an easier time to read this. If you could just fix that part, mainly shortening the chapter names, since I think it's what's causing it. Oh, and the way you describe Yami, kinda sounds like LadyDevimon. Anyways, you asked if anybody has an extensive knowledge of the final episodes of Tamers. Well, I do, considering that I recorded the final episodes. If you need any help on that, just e-mail and I'll be willing enough to do so. |
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