| "Suspicions" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: DBZ rocks
Reviewed By: Trunks' Lover On: January 10, 2004 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! I think people should do more fics bout Krillin! He's always taken for granted! I loved the idea of M/Y and the way you potrayed Yamcha as a honourable man. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Faye Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is so unique. I love your idea of some more "mini" stories like this one. The idea of Kuririn's POV is so original. I was like.. who is this? when i started reading it. Kewl. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 23:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked! I really enjoyed hearing the Yamcha/Marron romance from Kuririn's perspective. I think you did a really good job with this. I could totally imagine myself in his shoes and I felt his anger and betrayal. Poor Kuririn. Well, I can't wait for more. You sure have been updating quickly lately, and I wanted to say thank you. ^_^ Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Puar Briefs On: January 11, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute. Thoroughly enjoyed the little teeny bit with Juunanagou. Many thanks for giving good ol' Yamucha credit AND a pretty girl. Very original to have a Y/M AND from Kuririn's perspective. And more credit (for you) for (giving) credit (to Kuririn)... Thanks for not turning Kuririn into an Evil Demon Father and killing Yamucha on the spot.
In all: VERY enjoyable story! Very original and well-written. I could see it all. --P.B. |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... this wasn't quite what I was expecting when I visited... Marron did have QUITE the secret, eh? U need to put drama and/or angst in the story description as well! This fic was really good, and it deserves the genres. Though now I may not be able to get the image of Vegeta in pink bunny slippers out of my head... >_ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sweet and just reminds me of what i have to look forward to when my doughter hit that Teenager. this is very good I have always liked your fics and pics keep it up |
