| "New Dawn On Amoi" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: yvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, is a great fics i would really like to read more if you continue, guess is the first fics i read that is the beginning of what is going to happend.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 22:18 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! loved it!! :O i've never read a 'pre-Jupiter' one! lol, i had a hell of a time reading it though, b/c "Jason" looks so much like "Iason". did you do that on purpose? to mess w/ my head? :P great job with this! and i'd love to see more if you do decide to come back... ;) oh... that other reviewer said you did it on purpose... i'll be damned. cool!
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Reviewed By: Reviewer #3 On: February 16, 2003 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I like the way it parallels the Ai no Kusabi universe we know from the manga and Anime. Your characters are full, and the way in which you executed the takeover was fabulous. Great work, so keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Jade Pheonix On: January 13, 2003 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original plot.I look foward to seeing more of this. |
Reviewed By: Lizard On: January 10, 2003 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this all in one go. It got very addictive I have to say, and the way you handled the take-over was very well done. I think my favourite thing was the way Jason, Rand and Kaine resembled Iason, Raoul and Katze, it's so easy to imagine that they were their ancestors etc. Anyway, I'm sad to hear that you won't continue it, though it is a good ending, leaving the reader wondering. Anyway, I'll be looking forward to reading more of your fics. |
