| "An Altered View, Bulma and Vegeta" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: jenie_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! HEY! I like it. Keep it coming! Soon you'll have lots of reveiws! I know it. Well your story was awesome and I don't mean to be rude but I have to reveiw later. Please for give me for my early leaving. Usually I would type a page in this situation but I really do got to update my story now. Please forgive me and I promise on the sword of Excalaber(?) I give my word to reveiw your next chapter. |
Reviewed By: B+V=Trouble On: January 10, 2003 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has a lot of promise so far. Can't wait to read more. |
