| "Bonded by Pain and Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I found this to be a really interesting story. I'm glad I read it. Nice job.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original never read it like that before. PTSD and Bulma turning into a saiyan very good.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to update? or are u done? |
Reviewed By: DarkPrincess On: May 22, 2003 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is pretty good. i wonder if this is the end of the srory or just the begining.....hmmmmm? oh well good job! |
Reviewed By: bretons56 On: April 11, 2003 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha, that is a really good fic that I enjoyed so much!! I like your personal twist of the story of our favorite couple. It change of all the biting thing (even if I like it too).
Please update soon, I crave for more!!! |
Reviewed By: bretons56 On: April 11, 2003 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha, that is a really good fic that I enjoyed so much !! In fact, I like your turn in the events that occure between our favorite couple. That change of all the biting thing (even if I like this idea too) but changement is welcome. Please update soon, I crave for more !!!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where the fuck was this gem!! ,Nah I think the question is where the fuck I was that I missed such a good fic?!
Well I must say its different and I liked the house of vegeta crest on the back thing very original in my mind.
If u need a beta I offer my services also e-mail me at nsbvegetadbz@aol.com if u want.
Later!
PS loved the lemon! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where the fuck was this gem!! ,Nah I think the question is where the fuck I was that I missed such a good fic?!
Well I must say its different and I liked the house of vegeta crest on the back thing very original in my mind.
If u need a bet I offer my services also e-mail me at nsbvegetadbz@aol.com if u want.
Later!
PS loved the lemon! |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: April 10, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN this is good. hahahah
Look, if u need a Beta reader I can do it. I am a Beta reader on Fanfiction.net for three authors. Let me know. And also send me notice when you up-date ok.
singsaong47@earthlink.net
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: April 10, 2003 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN this is good. hahahah
Look, if u need a Beta reader I can do it. I am a Beta read on Fanfiction.net for three authors. Let me know. And also send me notice when you up-date ok.
singsaong47@earthlink.net
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
lol cool so far... lol i think it's great that you made yamcha gay. please continue |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 15:30 CST
Comment/Review:
oh honey, you HAVE to keep going with this! don't abandon the poor readers! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good. I can't really offer any help on what to improve, just keep the humor coming! I'm curious to see where Vegeta's psychological issues are going to affect everything. Can't wait until the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Bender On: January 13, 2003 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story so far. The arguments between Bulma and Vegeta are inventive and hilarious. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
cool so far good luck on finding a beta reader lol i know what you mean i need one too my grammar really sux. |
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