| "Bonded by Pain and Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where the fuck was this gem!! ,Nah I think the question is where the fuck I was that I missed such a good fic?!
Well I must say its different and I liked the house of vegeta crest on the back thing very original in my mind.
If u need a beta I offer my services also e-mail me at nsbvegetadbz@aol.com if u want.
Later!
PS loved the lemon! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where the fuck was this gem!! ,Nah I think the question is where the fuck I was that I missed such a good fic?!
Well I must say its different and I liked the house of vegeta crest on the back thing very original in my mind.
If u need a bet I offer my services also e-mail me at nsbvegetadbz@aol.com if u want.
Later!
PS loved the lemon! |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: April 10, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN this is good. hahahah
Look, if u need a Beta reader I can do it. I am a Beta reader on Fanfiction.net for three authors. Let me know. And also send me notice when you up-date ok.
singsaong47@earthlink.net
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: April 10, 2003 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN this is good. hahahah
Look, if u need a Beta reader I can do it. I am a Beta read on Fanfiction.net for three authors. Let me know. And also send me notice when you up-date ok.
singsaong47@earthlink.net
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
lol cool so far... lol i think it's great that you made yamcha gay. please continue |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 15:30 CST
Comment/Review:
oh honey, you HAVE to keep going with this! don't abandon the poor readers! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good. I can't really offer any help on what to improve, just keep the humor coming! I'm curious to see where Vegeta's psychological issues are going to affect everything. Can't wait until the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Bender On: January 13, 2003 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story so far. The arguments between Bulma and Vegeta are inventive and hilarious. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
cool so far good luck on finding a beta reader lol i know what you mean i need one too my grammar really sux. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your have to continue! you can't leave people alone with their imaginations! its not healthy!(well actualy it it but I just want another chapter) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 14:30 CST
Comment/Review:
*cries* please continue :( I'd offer my editing skills, though I believe I am seriously lacking in that department |
Reviewed By: warrior_princess_of_saiyans [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 17:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes, yes, I have posted this fic under the pen name Angel Wings before. Unfortunatly some a$$ stole my name and messed with my stuff, so I'm now going under the pen name warrior_princess_of_saiyans. So If you have seen this fic before, no I am not copying off of someone else. |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Have you posted this fic before? I could swear that I've read it before. If not, then it's a great start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Ja ne, Killarri. |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 18:26 CST
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Awwwwwww, the chapter ended just when it was really getting good!!! *pouts* ...Alright, I've given my reveiw, now more chapters! |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 16:27 CST
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you had better stick to your word and update soon! yes, it is the typical start but i still like it! keep it up |
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