| "Chasing the Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: ashleigh On: July 31, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have talent as a writer and should continue this fanfiction. It definitly has an origanal plot and I'm extremely interested in where it's going. Please update. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 13, 2003 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, Bardock is pretty hot...
Ummm...anyway...
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what's next! |
Reviewed By: LS On: March 13, 2003 17:48 CST
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I love the title of this chapter! Great! ^_~. I really like when Vegeta's voice is sudden and loud in the quiet room...and then his question is voiced soft and thoughtful...It's a nice contrast...[It seems so real] Very easy to 'hear' ^_^. I like Bulma's little 'exchange' w/ 'the Namek'...an interesting moment {when she is grasping at him...and then he 'gets her to stop it' hehe ^_~}. I like Bardock's "castle" line *ahem* *^_^*...I look forward to more of this story ...Nice chapter!! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Ku, I love how this fic has started! I don't know what Bulma's problem is - what I wouldn't give to have Bardock and Radditz living in my castle. (Nappa can stay in the barn, though!) And now she gets to help sweet little Vegeta become a legend... Jeez - some girls get all the fun! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow Ku that was great start and i like where this is going I hope lol keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 12:14 CST
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"..make you.. scream so loud..the whole castle hears you!” What a Saiyan that Bardock is. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 07:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.. B..B..Bardock lemon?? BARDOCK LEMON!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!! Bardy Lemon!!! *happy dance*
Bardock: "I was good too wasn't I??"
You always are darling...Puuuurrrr
umm... did anything else happen?? "Nothing as important as me getting laid...Thanks Ku, I owe ya one!!" *winks* "So, when's my next bout with the gorgeous Arana??"
Are you gonna talk about the rest of the chapter??? "Huh?? There was more??" I give up... |
Reviewed By: LS On: March 16, 2003 18:52 CST
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I have tried to leave this little note 3 different times now {it keeps not wanting to work?? Grrr ^_^'}...I'm trying it one more time ^_^. I like the title for this chapter...Great! My favorite part is when Vegeta's voice is sudden and loud in the quiet room...and then his question is voiced soft and thoughtful...it is a nice contrast...very easy to 'hear'...And I um *ahem* liked Bardock's "castle" line also...*^_^*. I can't wait for chapter 3 ^_~. |
Reviewed By: LS On: March 16, 2003 18:56 CST
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oops! *^_^*...I was looking in the wrong place {I should have scrolled to the bottom}...it appears my 'comment' did work at least one other time...I apologize for repeating myself...*^_^* |
Reviewed By: LS On: February 02, 2003 16:38 CST
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Ouuu! I like this one, I can't wait for the next chapter. I like when Bardock sweeps the chair out from under Radditz ha! ^_~. |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 09:30 CST
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I loved it. More, more soon. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh!!! I love Arthurian themed stories!! And you've put the Z gang to it!! Two of my favourite things together... all this and the most glorious Saiyan ever..a *gulp* masterful Bardock!!! Thank God someone with writing talent decided to do this story!! You did so VERY well with this first chapter, I'm all agog to read MORE!!!!!! (here's your second good review so far, and here's to many more!!) :D |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 18:15 CST
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Pretty cool, except for the fact that I have no idea what Arthurian myths r... Still! This should have at least a FEW good reveiws, it IS well written after all! |
