| "Another Time" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Hmm..
Reviewed By: Abigail Gitlin On: March 30, 2004 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
So I was thinking about this guy that asked Kat on a date and I thought (I know its really not my place to say anything and I dont know if you had already thought about it but) ok so I thought that the guy's characterization should be like someone who is impossible not to like, you know, the whole package, personality, intelligence, wit and oh yea really hot too. I dont know why I feel the need to really torture Trunks at this moment, but I think Id be great. You dont really have to pay attention to what I think I was just suggesting or ok whatever. Youve been doing a really great job so far. I really like what you've made of this story.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: ME On: October 29, 2003 16:42 CST
Comment/Review:
your story is going great! I just love it... I like the plot, and I really like Kat she's cool.. I can't wait until you add your next chapter!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: kixbra On: October 17, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I think it is great keep adding. okay you portray all the characters great and it is very original. keep adding to it. Don't end it PPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Bye :)
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Title: good
Reviewed By: kixbra On: October 17, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I think it is great keep adding. okay you portray all the characters great and it is very original. keep adding to it. Don't end it PPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Bye :)
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Reviewed By: Famke On: September 21, 2003 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yea ok I checked up on this fic and this is the first time I read the author's note. For some reason I thought this was on fanfiction.net, but its not I dont think. Anyway, I just wanted to say yea I like your story too and I dont really have any negative things to say. Umm take your time with the next chapters or whatever and good luck.
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Reviewed By: Famke On: September 21, 2003 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yea ok I checked up on this fic and this is the first time I read the author's note. For some reason I thought this was on fanfiction, but its not I dont think. Anyway, I just wanted to say yea I like your story too and I dont really have any negative things to say. Umm take your time with the next chapters or whatever and good luck.
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Reviewed By: The Cat's Meow On: September 01, 2003 02:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
You better get your little butt writing a new chapter soon. I love this story so much. Great job so far. Oh and I've waited very patiently for a new chapter. |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. I've just found this and while I got a glimpse of the bigger picture, I'm glad that you're taking the time and trouble to create and give some depth to your character. Keep going and update soon! |
Reviewed By: Sum1iswatchingtv On: January 19, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really REALLY COOL! You have to keep updating/writing next chapters. Lots of fun. |
Reviewed By: cherryblossom0286 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 00:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow...That would have to be one of the best DBZ fics i've read... GREAT job! |
