| "moons hopes" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: jack_cat On: June 01, 2005 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed it very much although i do wish you would continue this story, i can understand writers block however i would really like to see where your great creativeity and ideas are going.
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Reviewed By: cosmicmoon On: March 21, 2003 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool great story confusing though |
Reviewed By: ARGH_A_BARH! On: January 11, 2003 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
get some better spelling. otherwise it's decent. |
Reviewed By: Skunktrain On: January 11, 2003 20:04 CST
Comment/Review:
The story has great promise, but you need to capitalize proper nouns and the first word of each sentance; I couldn't get far simply because it annoyed me to no end. |
Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I like how think read so far but you need to do something about your formating |
