| "Treason and trust" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bird Of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 12:48 CDT
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Evil evil little cliffhanger. OMG Ken the Kaiser is reduced to a boy toy. Please continue asap! When you get the time of course. How's tomorrow look? ^_^* hehe |
Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 19, 2003 19:42 CDT
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I was weird and made next to no sense, but it shows potential. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Baylee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reviewed this story on fanfiction.net and it's still good! I loved this chapter! Hope Daisuke does something to help his koi! |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan On: June 07, 2003 01:20 CDT
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love it so far. I can't wait to read the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 19:33 CST
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Ch 5 was confusing at first, but it turned out good. Just keep up the good work and continue the story! |
Reviewed By: Ken_Ichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitely a great fic, and I beg you to continue it, cause I want to know if Dai and Ken are getting together. They just have to!! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 22:05 CST
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Ah yes, those horrible cliffhangers... Anyway, another blunt short chapter, not that I mind, but a little more discription would be nice, that is, if you feel like it.
Anyway, I like the plot and keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Wendigo On: February 07, 2003 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus...ken's a boywhore...0_0;
AWSOME!
Keep writing!!! |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Ichijouji On: February 07, 2003 15:14 CST
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AH!~ Please let poor ken-chan be okay!~ Dude, i Love your story!!!! KEEP WRITING! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 19:42 CST
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That was quite blunt on Daisuke's part. Ken was acting like a prostitute, no feelings to anything whatsoever, but if Osamu used him like that for a while... that would explain. Now I hope Ken stops acting like a bitch and like Daisuke befriend him.
Keep up the good work! Now i can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Venris On: January 19, 2003 05:08 CST
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perked... interest perked *thunks head on the moniter* OW! X_x;;
hehe, the more I read, the more my mind says that it's very possible.. and I love the fact that it didn't take you long to get this chapter out.. I wish I could do that.. Well I hope I get to read the next chapter soon.. If mid year testing doesn't prevent me from doing so. |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Ichijouji On: January 18, 2003 21:20 CST
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Wow! Fantastic, more please! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 14:38 CST
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Hello, it's me again, first off, where do you get your ideas? They're interesting. And I do wonder what is going to happen between Ken and Daisuke... Keep up the story, I like it's sick, twistediness (I'm sick and twisted myself, in the bloodlust way)... |
Reviewed By: Venris On: January 14, 2003 22:58 CST
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I like it. A good AU like this deserves a reviwe.. albiet the plot is a little distracting but I like it anyway. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 13:56 CST
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This seems quite interesting, by why the exclamtion points when Osamu is talking, it's like he's excited all the time or something. But I like it (despite it's disturbing plotline). Continue!!! |
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