| "Treason and trust" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: A~W On: January 09, 2004 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is really good! Its deep ya know. I cannot wait for the next chap. You have out done yourself!
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Reviewed By: Bird of Fire (don't feel like signing in) On: December 12, 2003 22:51 CST
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*sobs* Why Taichi? Hope he gets it in the end. And go Daisuke! *jumps and cheers* Get Ken back! I didn't know you updated with so many chapters since my last review. Nice to come back and see these, but what a place to end it! NO! Cliffhangers bad! *smacks hand* Bad! ^_^ Continue please!
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Reviewed By: Bird Of Fire On: August 02, 2003 23:17 CDT
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TAICHI? No way! That no good little...err...hehe...sowwy!
Nice update! Can't wait for the next! I just love how all this plot is unveiling. |
Reviewed By: Yersi Fanel On: July 30, 2003 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the Story, I hope you continue |
Reviewed By: Pash On: July 24, 2003 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE !!!! |
Reviewed By: Bird Of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 12:48 CDT
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Evil evil little cliffhanger. OMG Ken the Kaiser is reduced to a boy toy. Please continue asap! When you get the time of course. How's tomorrow look? ^_^* hehe |
Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 19, 2003 19:42 CDT
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I was weird and made next to no sense, but it shows potential. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Baylee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reviewed this story on fanfiction.net and it's still good! I loved this chapter! Hope Daisuke does something to help his koi! |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan On: June 07, 2003 01:20 CDT
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love it so far. I can't wait to read the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 19:33 CST
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Ch 5 was confusing at first, but it turned out good. Just keep up the good work and continue the story! |
Reviewed By: Ken_Ichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitely a great fic, and I beg you to continue it, cause I want to know if Dai and Ken are getting together. They just have to!! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 22:05 CST
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Ah yes, those horrible cliffhangers... Anyway, another blunt short chapter, not that I mind, but a little more discription would be nice, that is, if you feel like it.
Anyway, I like the plot and keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Wendigo On: February 07, 2003 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus...ken's a boywhore...0_0;
AWSOME!
Keep writing!!! |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Ichijouji On: February 07, 2003 15:14 CST
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AH!~ Please let poor ken-chan be okay!~ Dude, i Love your story!!!! KEEP WRITING! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 19:42 CST
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That was quite blunt on Daisuke's part. Ken was acting like a prostitute, no feelings to anything whatsoever, but if Osamu used him like that for a while... that would explain. Now I hope Ken stops acting like a bitch and like Daisuke befriend him.
Keep up the good work! Now i can't wait for the next chapter! |
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