| "Koi" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 07:14 CST
Comment/Review:
hey, I love your story. Please continue. And don't be discouraged by other peoples reveiws.
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Reviewed By: arctic renvenge On: September 14, 2003 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey asshole, get writing koi kitsune!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: TheDefinitionOfDarkness On: August 01, 2003 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm...Kurama wouldn't comit suicide. That I'm sure of. Even when he was fighting Uraurishima, he told him suicide wasn't the answer. KURAMA WOULDN'T!!! IT'S TOO WRONG! *Sniff* Sorry, I'm a little sensitive about suicide. Overall, I guess it's a decent fic. But what about "Kyou no sayonara wa mirai no hajimari" ? He said it himself! *Sigh* Again, sorry. Guess not everyone speaks Japanese. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 08:49 CST
Comment/Review:
PP- continue!!!!!
YPP- /laughing/ she looks like she needs a potty break!!! |
Reviewed By: morgaine_darkwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 06:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is intriguing, even if I can't imagine how you plan to go on since you have already killed two main characters in only four pages. I am sure you have something in mind, but please make the chapter longer |
