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| "Vegeta: Past and Future Redone" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where it is going. Please write more. I agree with Kahlan Nightwing. You should elaborate more on what goes on. | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. I thought by know a woman you meant they would have sex. I'm glad that you're starting their relationship slowly. Hmmmm, I don't know. It all seems so simple. What will happen with Bardock and Vegeta meet. Where's the older Vegeta, where's Yamcha. For a second there, I thought you'd have a conversation between Krillin and Bulma about what happened. Wasn't everyone curious as to how the medical lab blew up? Was anything important blew up? This is good or I wouldn't be reading and leaving reviews. But it lacks something.... | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2001 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks good. Still need help? I don't think I work with a Vegeta that weak and young (maybe) but I can help with anything else. Like any psychologically torturous things....angst IOW. Oh, the chapter was much too short and didn't have enough....Yamcha isn't dead, this I know. Although I'm wishing he was really badly. Vegeta is Vegeta after all, and no one messes with him!!!
Okay, done, see ya in a few! |
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