| "Be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Hot chick On: April 04, 2003 22:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue it's really good I just can't wait for the second part!!! |
Reviewed By: Aya_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great sequel, I liked it very much.
As for the Lime/Lemon thing? I think you are pretty good, so please DO try a lemon. If you feel insecure about it, I suggest a beta-reader for the lemon.
Anyways, Ja!
Aya-The village idiot's cousin's sister's niece. |
Reviewed By: shadow fox girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should keep writing this story it is great you must update soon.i want to see what happens to yugi when he goes back to school on monday. |
Reviewed By: Michiru On: January 19, 2003 13:34 CST
Comment/Review:
It`s so sweet!! Please continue!!! |
Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Ook, I love it! I demand more! ^,^ Poor Yugi! T~T
Teikimon- **rolls eyes** "Ne, I liked it...." |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait 4 the 3rd part. Is Crystal going 2 get back at Yugi?
Yugi: I hope not |
Reviewed By: miraitrunksluvr On: January 13, 2003 08:54 CST
Comment/Review:
...um yeah it was an excellent fic but, can you not use miraitrunksluvr in your fics please? It's kinda my original name from like.. uh.. 2 years ago..
EXCELLENT FIC
YAMI/YUGI WOOHOO |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 13, 2003 08:49 CST
Comment/Review:
That's a good beginning for a sequal. I liked the lime you had, it was cute. I hope you post the next part soon! Oh, and thanks for the response to my earlier review, I'll look forward to Yami singing again. |
