| "Love Sucks" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! |
Reviewed By: kagome-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
u gotta update alot moore |
Reviewed By: Mayuka_1 On: February 12, 2003 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. You should make the chapters longer. Update soon. Also, Make a sene(bad spelling) when Inu Yasha sees Naraku beating Kagome for cheating on him and Inu Yasha goes and kicks Naraku's stalking and beating mother f***ing ass. That would be so cool. Please update soon. I am dieing to see the next chapter. Inu Yasha & Kagome all the way!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax On: February 13, 2003 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story, and probably one of the most unique ones that i've ever read. please add the next chapter soon |
Reviewed By: kagome3112 On: February 13, 2003 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO,NO,NO,NO it so not fair you have to update as soon as possible..u can't leave me hannging like this she goes in to his trailer all alone what happends do they kiss for real...oooo i wanna know..oh and what happend to Naraku???? come on update please please,,,please update |
Reviewed By: musechan On: February 13, 2003 22:59 CST
Comment/Review:
The story is really progressing. I am sorry to hear that you had a writers block, though it's good to hear that you've continued the story as well. I'm loving the story, and I can't wait to see what Naraku will do next. Maybe Naraku might have someone kidnap Kagome and he tries to kill her and Inuyasha comes to save her and... BATTLE OF THE CENTURY!. Mmmm. Just a suggestion. :P |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 13, 2003 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!
kagome can have a BIIIG mouth sometimes huh?!?!
please continue the story!!!!!!!!
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!
*MORE BEGGING*
*hears front door*
Oh NO my mom!!!!
I've got to go I'm grounded!!! o_O
bye!!!! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 On: February 15, 2003 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT WAS THAT...YOUR A TEASE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHERE IS THE LEMON AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*but normaly your story is really good ; )* |
Reviewed By: Anime_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SSSSSooooooo good i just loved the parts about Inuyasha be a posed boyfriend!
Hope your writer's block goes away soon! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 03, 2003 19:55 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE PUT SESSHO IN THE STORY!!!!!!!
PLEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!*goes on knees to beg!!!!!!* |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 03, 2003 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I HATE WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!!!!!
Maybe you should have the next chappy where naraku
comfronts inu and a BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG FIGHT SCENE!!!!!!
MAKE IT SEEM LIKE INU'S GOING TO LOST THEN SOMEONE
COMES TO THE RESCUE(miroku)
hope this helps! ^_~
please continue the story!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
oho writers block really sucks, i think pretty much all of us here know that.
You should plan how long it's gonna take them to fall in love, them space it out between the chapters.
Make up fun little scenarios like him taking her onto the set to be an actor for a new show 'cause he thought she was good or something like that.
At one point though, you should DEFINATLY have a fight or confrontation scene.
(?.?)>[What's the difference?]
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Maybe Sesshoumaru would intervene because he thought it was wrong, or Naraku recruits others to stalk Kagome, even further pushing her into Inu's watch.
But for the next chapter maybe you could write something that goes from when she was in his trailer, like Miroku finding her.
(^.')>[Just some suggestions! Hope you get over your block!]
because i really want you to continue! |
Reviewed By: dfh On: February 03, 2003 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic pls if youre gonna update pls tell me my email is pauisanj@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: dfh On: February 03, 2003 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic pls if youre gonna update pls tell me my email is pauisanj@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: TopazAngel On: February 02, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fic i've read. It's so original and i can't eait to read more |
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