| "Inuyasha's Day Off" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: dantesscythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2011 14:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had a few problems with it kikyo's and koga's names were wrong but I still enjoyed some dialog felt rushed and a bit more subtlety wouldn't have hurt however I did enjoy it good job some very good potential keep at it maybe next time do one with original characters |
Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 01:34 EDT
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Oh my God, that was hilarious! I nearly fell off my chair while reading it. I love it. You are the goddess of comedy.
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 22:46 EST
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I LOVED your story, I couldn't stop laughing. I give it two tumbs up......dust bunnies from under my bed start claping....anyway...I hope to read any other fanfictions made by you in the future....keeps hearing the claping from under the bed....but anyway I hope you get more reviews because this story deserves it!!!.....turns vacuum on to scare the tribe of dust bunnies under my bed, who said to stop claping.. you all will clap and review this story or I'll suck you up got it?...turns back to author sorry about that. Well Ja ne for now!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 00:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Inu Yasha you're my hero..." this fic rocks!
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Title: o_0
Reviewed By: filialunae618 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 17:05 EDT
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omfg! that was one of the funniest fics ive EVER read!!!!!!!!!! u def. had 2 read ur other story 2 kinda get this one but it was sooooo worth it!!!!!! im so g2 recommend this story in my next fic!!! u should do more side stories... great job ~aya
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Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 00:36 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u seriously should make like a little series of stories using the adventures of inuyasha a west..this story is hysterical..i read the other one too playgrounds of the mind...u shoud honestly though make a little series of stories outlining thier adventures...this one made me feel like when i was in high school trying to avoid the cops and trying to convince the bus driver to let all of us on the bus using school tokens..i seen much of philadelphia by cutting school in high school |
Reviewed By: Pucca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 15:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you had Inuyasha tell us to review. And I can't say no to such a cute face so, I say I liked your fic epecially when Kikyo ended up on her ass! hahaha |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 20:48 EST
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hehe, this was so totally cool! your writting is hilarious, it's like pee-yourself funny. while i was reading it i'd burst out laughing and at one point someone even came up to check on my cause i was laughing so hard!!!
you must do something based on another movie!! something that comes to mind is "When Harry Met Sally" but that may be a sucky suggestion who knows, but you've got to do another one! it was so cool!
Mara |
Reviewed By: Yume On: January 14, 2003 17:38 EST
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This has been the story of the week!No month!
i haven't laughed this hard for a long time. Thanks
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 17:32 EST
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LMAO
i was laughing through half the fic!
some of the parts reminded me of Ranma 1/2 for a second o.O |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 11:44 EST
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hehe that was really cool! I luv dat muvie so YIPPE! (can't let down an offer that Inu Yasha would be dissappointed in!)
~Allie~ |
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 19:44 EST
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It was a wonderful and funny story! I want another! |
Reviewed By: MysticIceDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 09:32 EST
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*Smiles* Awesome, short story ^^ -Reviewed 'cause Inu-chan suggested it- Welp, i liked it a lot...and yeah, bye! |
