| "The Life and Times of a Girl Named Blaise Zabini" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: ya know,
Reviewed By: La loba On: September 26, 2003 23:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
ya know earth is also called gaia. hm. well, its about time you updated yer story. try redin one of mine. although the're better on fanfiction.net. but, oh well, very good keep it up. and one other thing : nothing is scarier than a midget dressed as a clown on a pogo stick. (shudders) scary.
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Reviewed By: Avia On: June 27, 2003 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is soooo kewl. me & laloba just reread all this and we luv it legolas is sooooo kickarse. hehehehe. having Ginny be there friend is such an original idea. good use of sweatdrops and Jap words!!! AWESOME!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AthenasFire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYYY! THE HAPPY FISH ON TUESDAY DANCE!!!!! I love your fic! I love LOtR and Harry Potter (I just got the newest book doncha know) and your combination of both is SO originaland funny and cool and creative and a lot of other really positive things! Write more! Please! I'd really appreciate it if you would take a look at my fics. Amatuer fic writer that I am, I would benefit from your wisdom! Thanks again! |
Reviewed By: La loba On: June 09, 2003 01:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story is totally kickass you must finish it or i will send my army of mutant ninja monkeys after you |
Reviewed By: TASAKAPEOTKAUU On: May 08, 2003 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I get it now. I forgot that she already knew about the Elves and that she knew that she was half-elven already. Does she get to choose whether or not she wants immortality or not or is she automatically immortal because of her mother being Death and all of that? I really like how you tied Hal into the story. All of the Astral projection stuff you put in her really added to it and I was wondering how you thought of that other thing you wrote about with the body of Light. I think that its cool that even though you used the movie version where Haldir died you still included him and that you actually got his personality almost down. you should have made him a little gruffer though and if she had really made the connection between Galadriel and a drag queen he'd have snarled at her (cuz hey ghost, can't do much else). I really like this. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: TASAKAPEOTKAUU On: May 08, 2003 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gave me a paragraph!!!! I feel so...loved. How does she know Haldir? I mean she didn't know about the Elves yet she knows Elves... That's just kinda kooky. But go her and her knowing Elves.
Keep writing. Don't let the insane lack of reviews get you down. It's a good story and an idea that hasn't been played yet. Very original of you. :) |
Reviewed By: TASAKAPEOTKAUU On: January 17, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story but I really can't picture legolas as an old man. *giggles at the thought* He'd look sooooo ridiculous. I'm just itching to know what the last secret is and I was kinda hoping in the end or middle or soon or ever that she could help Harry when he kicks Voldemorts self absorbed arse. They should be friends and Draco should have to live with it. Or the Elves should come back to earth so it could be like a high school reunion except ... not. anyway good job and I hope you post more soo. bye :) |
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