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| "The Life and Times of a Girl Named Blaise Zabini" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: khaosfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 18:48 CDT
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Blaise Zabini isn't your average Slytherin. (No, she's too much of an airheaded Mary Sue for that.) She's smart, (What do you think cunning means?) she's loyal, (Now you're just sounding riddikulus.) and she wants to kick Voldemort's arse (Well, that's nice. Do you really think that all Slytherins are Death Eaters? Self-serving does not equal homicidal.) Your writing is not half bad, but you're flattering your main character. Tell her to get a life.
| Reviewed By: yaoi-lover13 On: February 25, 2005 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say its a good fic. Are you really a fan of legolas ? no inssult just saying that alot of authors that write a legolas fanfic arnt really fans. sad huh. anyway i love your Fanfic the second best i ever read(for what i call the best go to fanfiction.net go to search put the collums to (top left) title (bottom left)type in another world (last one) set to zoids) if you dont i wont care but if you do ill deffinetly reveiw all your stories. i have one more thing to say GREAT FANFIC *O*
| Title: Flittiness
Reviewed By: skyfire_katana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
A Harry Potter crossover told from a Slytherin point of view with a main character that is not evil where Draco is cast in a positive light (breathe) in a fic that does not ::completely:: butcher the series? Different. I also wanted to commend you on your style of writing. It's fun to read, combining several styles, and the flitty effects of anime. Oh, and ignore Skye and fd. If they hate the story so much, why are they reading it? And why doesn't anyone who ever has anything bad to say stay signed in? This fic may be flitty, but it's fun to read. It's not a published novel, sure, but it's better than most of the crap I've read, and (did I mention?) It's fun to read. It's origional. Duh, of course it's not the same universe! ::thwacks Skye:: What do ya think crossovers are! Sure, some series fit together perfectly, just because they don't doesn't mean it's illigal to try! And as for Blaise being cliche, sure, she is, and she won't make it as a world favorite, or mine, but she's fun. I might add that I respect Skye for their opinion, but fd? Ch. Baka. Hn. Sorry about that. Some people annoy me. ::glares back at them:: I'll be sending them an evil chibi. Anyway, I'm not going to say this is the best fic I've ever read. But I enjoy it. It's flitty. Flitty don't make classics, but flitty is fun. So, now I have to go dust off those Harry Potter books on my bookshelf that have been sitting there for, when was the third movie in theatres?
| Reviewed By: lil_sis4556 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 10:20 CST
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Reviewed By: Crazy Spark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOO!!!!!!! i love this fic!! update or suffer the Crazy one's revenge! *puppy-dog-eyes* i luv this fic! Happy Fish on Tuesday!!!! WAHOO!! TheLordOfWhiteOut: don't mind her. she's nutty. CS: shutup. *Please* update! White-Out: please do. at this rate she's gonna drive *ME* mad. CS:woo! White-Out: ohno. NOT THE SUGAR, CRAZY!!!! Sawry. i really like. plze update. -zE CrAzY OnE.
| Reviewed By: Draqulyn On: May 27, 2004 11:09 CDT
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I've just now noticed, but your characters name is mentioned in the first Harry Potter book. I was shocked to realize that's were you got the name as I was reading it the other day. The whole time reading your story I kept thinking her name sounded familiar but I couldn't remember where I had heard but now I realize where it came from. I love the story by the way, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 15:27 CDT
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interesting!
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 17:14 CST
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WOWIE! Please continue! I luv this! It's so very (well not really) original! I luv it! YAY! You like anime! YAY! You like Legolas! YAY! I don't know what else to say! YAY! CONTINUE! YAY!
| Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 20:54 CST
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Oh, and btw Skye14321- it's 'dragged', not 'drug', which only shows how much you can give someone a 1 in spelling and grammer. Bakamoto....
| Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah- fd, how can you say three favorite fandoms? IT'S ONLY A TWO-FANDOM CROSSOVER, YA BAKA! ^^0 Ignore those last two reviews- I love this story so much, I laughed so hard, especially at chapter seven, and I will absolutely DIE if I don't see it continued! You rock!
| Reviewed By: fd On: January 28, 2004 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. Guy. Mod. Honestly? Get your paws off my three favourite fandoms, because you are ruining them by your mere presence. I will not be giving you constructive criticism because there is nothing at all redeemable about this fic. kthxbai
| Title: What the hell...
Reviewed By: Skye14321 On: January 27, 2004 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What in the name of holy hell is this thing? For one-- Blaise Zabini is male. IF you check the Harry Potter Lexicon it will tell you where and why this is true. For another-- Elves as Legolas and middle earth do not exist in this universe And finally This is the worlds worst mary sue and frankly needs to be drug behind the shed and shot.
| Title: Wow.....
Reviewed By: The Idiot Savant On: November 25, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno where to start....I LOVE this fic. I've read all the chapters so far and as I'm very impatient, PLEASE HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE!!!!! Um, yeah, anyways. I lurve your style and plot line and after reading this fic I'm starting to get into HP again, though I like the way you've spot-lighted the characters in Slytherin and I think I like your point of view of/on them better than J.K. Rowling's. Yeah. Well um, keep writing (sp? O_O), and don't let writer's block get you down,cos we all have it and we want to hear more of this fic! Yar...Over and out. ^__^
| Reviewed By: Draqulyn On: November 18, 2003 06:41 CST
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OMG, you have shown me a new side of Draco.... and i love him even more. This story is awesome and i don't see how people find it confusing. I didn't read the Sandman series and i understand it. is there something wrong with me? :( ........ anyway this story is awesome and i can't wait till you finish it. Catch ya later Draqulyn the Shadow Queen
| Title: orignal and loony
Reviewed By: village idiot [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is a very cool fic (real orignal) and you should update sooner please
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