Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* I can see why this won for best original. Great job.
It's weird, though. I felt myself feeling sorry for the guy. She said that it was like he married another girl in a hurry, and he didn't sound happy when he talked to her. *shrugs* Leave it to me to feel for him. But I do.
The way she interpreted the promise and then decided it was HER fault all along... Hn. Sad, really. (I remember feeling like that) But I don't want her to blame herself. So, I'm pretty much satisfied with the ending. Though, I think Gwen deserves a happy "ending." Ever think of a sequel?? *lol* Sorry, didn't mean to load the pressure on, I was just thinking, that's all.
Great job! ^_^ |
