| "Akirame Norwen" Reviews/Comments [ 159 ] |
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Title: simply amazing
Reviewed By: Raven's Spirit On: December 30, 2003 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story, kept me reading till i finished all of the chapters. Keep the chapters coming!!
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Reviewed By: kitty strife On: December 28, 2003 16:31 CST
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when are u gonna update again? u left us in suspense!!!!
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Reviewed By: FFantasy On: December 26, 2003 23:23 CST
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Great! Update, PLEASE! I want to read more! This is like the best story I've ever read!
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Title: KOOL
Reviewed By: XXFrogger105 On: December 26, 2003 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i luved ur story it was great i couldnt stop readin it!!! o wen r u gonna start on the other chapters? Please HURRY!!! must read more!!! lol
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Title: weeeeeeee!
Reviewed By: RedFalcOn On: December 20, 2003 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely amazing! your story is unbelieveabe! i luv it! i personally enjoy the way u portray Riku..*sigh*...ub! bak to earth! hehe but it's humerous, adventurous, and filled wif romance! totally luv it..can't wait for ch. 34! pleez continue to write! great job, you're an excellent author. RF
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Title: uh...
Reviewed By: RedFalcOn On: December 20, 2003 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i haf reallie enjoyed tha storie so far...i cood never think up the great chapters yOo hav! it's so interesting and unique from everywun elsez i hav read! *applause* but alas *sigh* the onlie thing i wish u'd change is (PLEASE!) bak to the first person view. the whole story (to me) lost sum of its glow wen it was changed to a third person view. it seemed to lose sum of the character's emotion, thots, and feelings (which i personally luved from the first chapters. anyway..im onlie on Ch.14 im gonna finish and type later i suppose. But i just had to compliment yOo on your job so far, pleez continue to write! RF
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Reviewed By: Kitty Strife On: December 18, 2003 16:03 CST
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where do you get your ideas? this is great!!!
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Title: Hiya!
Reviewed By: RinRinYotsubaPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story...still! You're starting to make me jealous of you, Neko.Anyways, keep up the awesome story! ^o^
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Reviewed By: Kitty Strife On: December 12, 2003 16:21 CST
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still luv the story. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: mei tenshi On: December 12, 2003 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this is sooo good ....just keep keep wrting writng when you want to write ....lol srry well keep up the good writin there neko :)
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Title: Update in sight?
Reviewed By: RinRinYotsubaPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there an update anytime soon??? Please say there is!! It's very sad to leave a cliffy with poor Riku being beat up....Please stop the insane beating of Riku!!! He doesn't deserve it *reads last chapter* OK, yes he does deserve that but for however long he's been beaten now I think is enough.Please? Or I'll think up something terrible to do to you....*You know I can't think anything up, Neko. I suck at punishments....* Um, I got a new story up but I don't know if you wanna read it. It's a vampire fic called Vampires Surround Me. So far I have 5 chapters up. Anyway, think up some more stuff for the story or....well I dunno the or part but it'll be terrible. Bunny-chan
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Reviewed By: Kitty Strife On: October 29, 2003 06:32 CST
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Are you ever going to update?! it's been almost two months since your last chapter and I wannaknow what happens next!!!!
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Reviewed By: StarBlaze On: October 18, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good story, but u need 2 update it more often.
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Reviewed By: extremeaction64 On: October 07, 2003 05:56 CDT
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I love this story! My sister and I were wondering if you could put a scene in where Riku has to dress up like a girl, like Cloud did in Final Fantasy 7. Just a suggestion!!
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Reviewed By: Vortex Crush On: September 28, 2003 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. But you need to update it. It is just cruel to stop with Riku getting the tar beat out of him by Akirame
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