| "Akirame Norwen" Reviews/Comments [ 159 ] |
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Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 11:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's good! can't wait till next chapter!! please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Phantom Duelist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never before in my life have I ever read such a fanfic. This story is as good if not better than most of the good novels i've read out there. Keep it up you are doing an incredible job. |
Reviewed By: Mei Tenshi On: June 11, 2003 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey just finised your last chp.now what is going to happen?and what's up with Erik?well please write more.man i sure do feel sorry for those who read this after your done.well this is better than any other story that i've read.see you next chp then.bye bye. |
Reviewed By: Alero On: August 21, 2003 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this was the greatest fan fic I've ever read! The only thing wrong was the periods after the dialouge, and some typos......Anyways, I could've rated the over all review a twelve. It was that good! You certainly have a knack for writing stories! I hope you'll come up with more fanfics! I'm behind you all the way! I especially liked the revenge Akirame got on Riku....Very creative....Your characters (the new ones) were well-developed and I really liked how all the series came together! Keep writing |
Reviewed By: Akira5867 On: May 16, 2003 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I finally get to comment on this ficcie!*huggles grunty plush* I had been reading it when it first appeared on fanfiction.net. Tee-hee*squeals like a schoolgirl* I really think this ficcie *bangs head on keyboard* ish awesome! I had been wonderin when you were gonna update*kills her sister, Carie and hides her dead carcass under the bed...AGAIN*Lol, hope to see the next chapter up soon! Keep up the good work! :3 |
Reviewed By: C*h*e*r*r*i*e*s On: May 12, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv luv luved chapter 4! ^_^ update ASAP! so when are akira and riku gonna get together huh!? lol :) |
Reviewed By: Majora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 23:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Erik, getting bitten by the hyena and all. Anyways please keep on writing please. |
Reviewed By: pyromaniac vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic and i really like Kingdom Hearts. You're a really good writer. Please write more. |
Reviewed By: Majora On: April 08, 2003 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm... Good job for the author and please write more. It's a great romance fic. Umm.. Sorry but i'm having a hard time explaining. -.-; |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 13:10 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL i can't wait to see how AKira and Riku cat when they wake up together!!! ^_^ and poro Erik! for a slitty sec i thought him and red were gonna be a couple, but then you put that 'i love yu as a father' or something like that. great job keep it coming! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: RinrinYotsuba [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!!!! These chapters are sooooo cool!!!!!! Keep up the good work and write more soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: RinrinYotsuba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This IS the best darn story by far!!!! You have to make more!!! I can tell I like a story if I just can't stop thinking about it no matter where I am. Now I think about this story so much that I've started telling everyone that I have an invisible 17-year-old stalker! It's funny!!! Anywayz, I wrote a poem at 11 p.m. and I was wondering if you like to read it?? It kinda repeats itself but it's still cool. And if ya wanna read it, e-mail me at TsurugiAnime@aol.com |
Reviewed By: cute butterfly On: March 19, 2003 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love storys like yours and are hard to come by anywhere.and i can't stop reading them so please write more. |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Another kick-butt chappie! ^_^ your a great writer, keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: Majora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about the nine in spelling, but I noticed something. Anyway, please write more. I like this fanfiction. (^^) |
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