"Mistaken" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: amy On: August 21, 2003 13:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OH MY GOD I LOVE YOUR STORY PLS WRITE MORE SOOOOOOON. |
Reviewed By: Kae On: August 20, 2003 18:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: More!!!! This story was great!!! It's flowing and a very easy read. I luv it please update soon!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 20, 2003 08:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! I love this fic. This chapter is great, I am dying to find out what will happen next. You just have to update soon. |
Reviewed By: ens On: August 20, 2003 00:17 CDT Comment/Review: Did you have to end it like that? Please, please update really soon, very soon. What a way to keep someone hanging... |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: August 19, 2003 23:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Yeahhhh,now your just toying with me.Please tell me your posting the next chapter...NOW! No? Or maybe...NOW!? AWWWAAAHHH come on! Out with it already!:) |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 09, 2003 12:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I like this fic. Please update soon and keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: Turtlefire On: July 31, 2003 16:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It is a great fic, and it is getting better and better! Very creative and well-written. Please update! Thanks!! |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: July 23, 2003 12:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: I'm dying to see what Heero does.Post the next one soon please! |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 14:57 CDT Comment/Review: Eh?!?! What happens next?!?! Ooo! No fair!! Post more, please? I'll love you forever if you do!! *bats eyes* |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 19, 2003 17:18 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Excellent. I Can't wait to see what Heero has planned. More Soon!!? |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 14:41 CST Comment/Review: *Sweat drop* Sorry it's been taking me so long to post but it seems my muse RYU likes to write several different versions of each chapter before he deems it worthy to write. And I am also sorry if Heero seems a bit OOC, like I said it's harder for me to get into his head than it is for Duo's. This is also a bit longer than what I first expected and it's only my first ficcie! Stay tuned for the Lemony goodness that should be coming up shortly!!! Thanks for all the kewl reviews!! :) |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: March 18, 2003 14:07 CST Comment/Review: Wah, more! |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 04:57 CST Comment/Review: Aaahhhh...well, I'm glad Heero overheard them. The idea of his happening to see Duo seducing a man who LOOKS like him is kinda cool, as is the way you've written his internal rage and regret. |
Reviewed By: Duosgirl02 On: March 12, 2003 16:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Duo is so stupid there Heero is sitting right in the club, bar or where ever and he walks out with so Heero look alike. And Heero is so stupid why didn't he just go over there and grab Duo and drag him out but nooooooo. But anyway keep on going its getting better and better as you go no UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duosgirl02 On: March 12, 2003 16:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Duo is so stupid there Heero is sitting right in the club, bar or where and he walks out with so Heero look alike. And Heero is so stupid why didn't he just go over there and grab Duo and drag him out but nooooooo. But anyway keep on going its getting better and better as you go no UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! |
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