| "Mistaken" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 14:41 CST
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*Sweat drop* Sorry it's been taking me so long to post but it seems my muse RYU likes to write several different versions of each chapter before he deems it worthy to write. And I am also sorry if Heero seems a bit OOC, like I said it's harder for me to get into his head than it is for Duo's. This is also a bit longer than what I first expected and it's only my first ficcie! Stay tuned for the Lemony goodness that should be coming up shortly!!! Thanks for all the kewl reviews!! :) |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: March 18, 2003 14:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Wah, more! |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 04:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Aaahhhh...well, I'm glad Heero overheard them. The idea of his happening to see Duo seducing a man who LOOKS like him is kinda cool, as is the way you've written his internal rage and regret. |
Reviewed By: Duosgirl02 On: March 12, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is so stupid there Heero is sitting right in the club, bar or where ever and he walks out with so Heero look alike. And Heero is so stupid why didn't he just go over there and grab Duo and drag him out but nooooooo. But anyway keep on going its getting better and better as you go no UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duosgirl02 On: March 12, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is so stupid there Heero is sitting right in the club, bar or where and he walks out with so Heero look alike. And Heero is so stupid why didn't he just go over there and grab Duo and drag him out but nooooooo. But anyway keep on going its getting better and better as you go no UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 10:53 CST
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Finally caught up with the story. Now you have me wondering. WHO DID DUO PICK UP!!!! Duo never described his face. The jeans sound similar to Heero's. But Heero saw Duo's "mark" for the night. Please let it be Heero he picked up. If not at least let Heero follow them. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 25, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God Duo is a dumbass. How could he not look into Heero's eyes and know it was him? He was a stinkin' Gundam pilot for god's sake! I mean one would think he would have better powers of observation! Ok anyway I hop you write again soon cause I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 21:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Please! Don't stop!! I wanna read more!!! |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 24, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this is getting really good, but you ended it right at the good part! How nutso are you?! Right at the part where Duo will find out he is dancing for the real Heero! Come on please I hope you update this soon so I can find out what the hell is going to happen next! You are leaving me on a damn cliff so update soon!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Angel of innocence On: February 24, 2003 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing its really good i want to read more more MORE!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: GW_ShenLong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 09:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is beginning to get more interesting. I look forward to reading more of it. Update soon please. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Night On: January 14, 2003 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice one, I would like to know where it goes... Keep on writing... Maybe a lemon later???? |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 07:25 CST
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This is a very good beginning and well written. A depressed Duo leads to many interesting plots. I can only hope that the "prey" for tonight is the real Heero. If he is what will Duo do? What will Heero do? |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 06:38 CST
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This sounds pretty interesting so far, and I would really like to see where it goes. You writing is very good. Keep up the good work, 2X1 foreva |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 16:35 CST
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hahahaha...how mad heero? this is a great start! Can't wait for more...there will be more, right? |
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