| "Beautiful Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saberwulfe On: March 31, 2003 12:09 CST
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No, I haven't died, I'm still here. And yes, I'm still writing this fic. Give me some time 'cause Chapter 4 is receiving a bit of an overhaul, (I kinda wrote myself into a corner) so just be patient young one, 'cause good things comes to those who wait. |
Reviewed By: Vegiku On: March 25, 2003 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you continuing this? Please write more, this is one of the best i have read. |
Reviewed By: Saberwulfe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 15:48 CDT
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Here we go! I finally updated it. |
Reviewed By: Arrow_Windrider [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay Stuart, you know who this is. Finish the damn thing. I get to the end of the second chapter and then nothing. was this ment to be some cruel joke to me and all the rest of the people who read and enjoy your storys? |
Reviewed By: Saberwulfe On: February 06, 2003 11:57 CST
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I've tried to keep the characters as close as possible, however. Some of their personalities have been changed slightly, or drastically, I know. By the way, I get it, his name is Ono Tofu, not Cid Tofu. I didn't know that at the time, I will change it in the chapters to come. Thankyou all for the many reviews, they are helping.
-Stuart |
Reviewed By: travis1057 On: February 03, 2003 15:05 CST
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its a good story but dr. tofus name is Ono not cid |
Reviewed By: travis1057 On: February 03, 2003 15:03 CST
Comment/Review:
its a good story but dr. tofus name is Ono not cid |
Reviewed By: busogre On: February 02, 2003 15:27 CST
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I have no problem with the fic other than the fact that the characters aren't acting like they would, but hey its your story so you can have some artistic merrit. My only comment is cid is not tofu's name its ono. I know its a small mistake, but bugged through out the entire chapter |
Reviewed By: Winnie On: January 24, 2003 18:56 CST
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very cool. never seen it done that way before. please continue it. hope ranma still knows martial arts or it would be really sad to see everyone protecting her for a change |
Reviewed By: Lunarian On: January 16, 2003 15:59 CST
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Great story thus far. Ranma wasn't losing all of her memories was she? That would kinda suck if she'll be like a totally new person with no real essence of whom ranma is.
Nice setup though. Gotta luv' them Ranma female fics. |
Reviewed By: John Surber On: January 15, 2003 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've seen Ranma becomes a permanent girl before, but this is a pretty interesting format to use it in. I'm pretty sure it hasn't been done before. I look forward to seeing what happens when Ranko wakes up and starts her new life, and how Genma will deal with Nodoka. |
Reviewed By: Saberwulfe On: January 15, 2003 10:42 CST
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Thankyou Fred! I have a request to anyone reading this. I would greatly appreciate it if someone would create some fanart. (I can kinda draw, but I can't draw Ranma, or the rest of the Nerima wrecking crew). I will be posting the next chapter in about two to three weeks. |
Reviewed By: Fred Herriot On: January 15, 2003 01:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice! Please continue this! |
Reviewed By: Saberwulfe On: January 14, 2003 12:34 CST
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You'll have to wait, something is wrong and it won't display my chapters. GRRRR! |
Reviewed By: Cyde On: February 19, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
NOW |
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