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Reviewed By: Tuisto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, quite a enjoyable read. A interesting varriant for the Ranma, (or should that be Ranko?), universe. I'd really like to see how you proceed from here; what with this dark looming impending threat on one hand, and a date with Ryoga on the other hand. And you've piqued my curiousty with "Death Vendor" and the other mysteries you've woven, what's this all about? Well, hopefully you'll be able to bring enlightenment in your next chapters. Very nice story, and new chapters would be GREATLY appreciated. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: HeDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Really like this fic. how about another chapter?
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 13:36 CST
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its ono tofu not cid tofu
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Title: Hail to the Beaustiful Girl
Reviewed By: Hyperman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get all tens baby! I really was shocked when I first read this fic, but I couldn't put it down. The way you have the characters fleshed out is awesom, its nice to finally see a little bit of the real Kuno and Kodachi. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Disclaimer gurl! [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 16:22 CST
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update soon!! wanna see next chappie!!!!
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Reviewed By: ookami youkai! -hugs them- On: January 14, 2005 21:07 CST
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totally sweet story!!!! i love it!!!! update soon!!!!
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Title: double yay
Reviewed By: Kitsune Returneth On: June 30, 2004 09:46 CDT
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AND MEGATRON CHAN!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deep and slightlly philosophical indeed. Even when ranma is truelly dead the poor girl side never seems to cut a break
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Reviewed By: YAY!!! A DIGIMON!!! On: June 14, 2004 09:39 CDT
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Hugs Greymon...GREYMON-CHAN!!!
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Title: The Darkness
Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon On: June 11, 2004 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Leige Saberwulfe, I compliment thee for thine imaginative brilliance. I must point out however, that thine tale has deeply disturbed me, although I am not quite certain of what way. I find myself in an emotional turmoil. What thou hast written, is so incredibly dark, that I am all but reduced to tears during the characters self-reflections. I actually broke into tears when the "ghost" of male Ranma finally passed on. If I ever need help with mine own reflections, then all I need do is read through this again. I think I shall go off and cry some more. I thank thee; for having the courage of both mind and soul to write this tale. For without either one, thou would have most surely failed. I bid thee, adieu. As I return to the darkness from wich I came, I utter but a single phrase. "Until the next we meet." "Oh! And never mention this review to my father!" Sincerely, Lord Aries Greymon
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Reviewed By: Sugoi Kitsune On: June 03, 2004 21:02 CDT
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Update update update
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Title: HI!
Reviewed By: Author On: May 13, 2004 13:50 CDT
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Guess what? I'm almost finished the next chapter. Expect it up in about a week.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Li Ryoyami On: April 02, 2004 13:57 CST
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Hey! it's my shinobi!!! thanks lttle sister, this is a great story btw, plz update soon! or else the kitsune my return....
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Reviewed By: compman44 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 10:03 CST
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As they say, "the more, the merrier." (Cliché does not apply to all circumstances; see store for details.)
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Author On: January 31, 2004 10:15 CST
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Would anyone be seriously upset if I added another new character? Please tell me!
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