| "Boys Night Out" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: BAKA YO! On: August 04, 2005 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that your fanfic was so enjoyable...In more ways than one:cough~HOT~cough.Also that your grammer was great...well at least by my standards.Oh and it was "creative".Heh,heh,heh!Oh you should write a no.2 to this story.
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Reviewed By: Lain_chan16 On: June 09, 2005 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
XD mmmm yummy :P I luv the name for shu's boots "pick me up and fuck me boots." O i love it! awesome job! - ja!
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Reviewed By: Caity-lin On: February 08, 2004 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahaha!! That was excellent! Oooo.. Just the thought of Yuki and Shuichi on the dances floor together *immensely drooling*. And at the end with the lemonade made me laugh, yes I am easily ammused. Oh! And I like all the references.
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Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 23:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Yey! You made me very happy with this story! I can walk away smiling, knowing that I've experienced such a story. I sure wish there were more like this.. Very sexy and sweet.
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Reviewed By: matt a On: October 03, 2003 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
fic was awesome! and yes i got all those references... the "pick me up and fuck me" boots sounds nice i want to that to shu-chan anyway. you must do more lemons. PWPs are just fine
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Reviewed By: lolita On: July 28, 2003 00:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fan fic. only the after part after the dialog after story was over that austin powers thingy ? i mean ??? wtf... but story was good |
Reviewed By: Hanabi Reeza On: March 23, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic! I mean... I haven't read a lemon fic for a LONG time... it satisfied my hentainess... And... one question... What happened to ryuichi and Tatsuha? Hehehe... *hentai grin* Ganbari in other fics! |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 04:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi desu ne!!! *jumps up and down in happy, giddy, fangirl mode* That was soooooo yummy!!!! And the image of Yuki dancing in a club!!! Oh! That's just priceless! ^.^
I likey. I likey VERY much. Keep up the fantabulous work!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: ...... On: March 13, 2003 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!!!!! i love it!! keep up the
good work & keep writing
*cough* yuki dance*cough* |
Reviewed By: Requiem Duindain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seihi: Umm... Requiem is currently drooling nd could not sign her e so umm... yeah...Great fic.Great couple. Great idea. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi On: January 21, 2003 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! It was sooo great!!! It almost makes me want to go out and find a pair of those boots. ^_^
Keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: Erin the Art Chick On: January 15, 2003 22:36 CST
Comment/Review:
::whew::
Mmm... Lemony goodness. Tee hee.. "Ned"... That's so classic. I'm just droppin' ya a review since you were complaining about everyone reading and not leaving reviews... ::shrugs:: HEY! You got one all ready, besides me! Hooray!
Anyway, I like this fic, because it's YukixShu, my fav yaoi couple (and actually canon for once)! This is a great first fic, and yeah, Yuki is a bit OOC at points, angsty characters are hard to write... And the story did move a little fast (your always so eager to jump straight to the pr0n! ^_^). PWP's are fun, but I personally like a little build up beforehand - y'know, character and plot development and shit like that. -__-;;
Anyway, this fic is so cute! You do write nice lemons! ::fans self:: I wouldn't mind a longer one in the future... ^_^;; Hee...
Much |
Reviewed By: Authoress Choas [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 16:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Whooo! I like! ^^ Hmmmmm,but I'm wondering what
happened to Ryuichi and Tatsuha....hint hint ^^;;;; |
