| "Hunger" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Goku Rules [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUCKS
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Reviewed By: VLG [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 09:50 CST
Comment/Review:
*slaps forehead* Bloody hell! Leave it to me to use a word I'm not too familiar with and get it wrong! ^^;; I'm from the US, which is probably why I got the meaning of snog wrong. I don't even remember where I heard it, actually. ^^;; Now I'll have to back and fix that, won't I? Thanks for telling me, though. ^_~
VLG
I feel so silly ^^;; |
Reviewed By: Info On: January 19, 2003 09:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, but I just had to say this... your fic was good ^_^ I liked it.... but I just had to tell you one little thing...
Are you from England? Because I am and that's where the word snog comes from... now I'm not sure about other area's in the Uk but in the midlands a 'snog' is a kiss involovinng tongues *just thought I'd enlighten you ^_^* |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 17:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Or would that make her 10? ...*throws hands up in frustration* Oh nevermind! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 17:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooo, I'm pretty sure I know that one, she'd be about 11 cause I think there's about a 9 year age difference between Trunks and Bra. Of course I'm not sure but, *shrugs who is? Pretty good, keep going w/ this. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 15:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, the person can sense ki. One of the other Z fighter maybe? Hell if I know. Update soon cause this is going to bug me until I know! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm not into the odd pairings but I think this time I'll make an exception. more chapters? please!? Its really good.^_^ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have to think it was pan, I f Gohan had even meet Videl yet? If not her. Then I have no clue who it would be. Well any way this is a good start foe a fic keep it up |
