"Celebrations" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: dreamskat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 15:46 CST Comment/Review: wont you prity pleas with suger on top add the next chapter *puppy eyes* this story is H.O.T.T hott!
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:14 CDT Comment/Review: When are you going to freaking update your stories? ANY of them? I love your stories (GO YAOI!)...
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Reviewed By: darkflame7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 15:01 CST Comment/Review: wow you havent updated in awhile good story hope ya update
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 19:27 CST Comment/Review: u havent updated in a long time! *sob* >.< UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: starcrest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2003 11:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Hm, this one seems better than Sweet Dreams. I'm surprised. And I read this one first, by the way. Anyway, this is an awesome idea too. Delivery wasn't too bad, but you ought to redo your lemons. Go out and read, uh, Rain Camui's fics, or even Kracken's, and study their delivery when it comes to writing. Rain is especially good with NC, and Kracken is great with getting character's feelings across without souding corny and weird. Not that you do, it's just, well, you could work on it. But I like this fic, and where it seems to be going. |
Reviewed By: Peeves (yes, peeves -.-) On: April 06, 2003 17:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Whimper* *sniff, sniff* Poor wittle Davis… You, my friend, never cease to AMAZE me that was absolutely… I’m speechless utterly, utterly speechless. Everything, every way you wrote was absolutely perfect… I mean you could totally see though stages of Ken stupid insanity. Really, really well done! Luved it! (Except the part where Davis died boohoo) |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 23:34 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i just read this fic yet again... empress, pls update ur digimon NCs more! ^_^ hehe... *greedy eyes, rubs hands together* |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: February 02, 2003 17:52 CST Comment/Review: Oh, that's so very interesting. ^-^; Can't wait for the next part and the favor that Ken will ask for later... or should I say the Digimon Emperor will ask for? XD |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 16:55 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hmm.. i never finished reading this fic on FFN. keep on goin! |
Reviewed By: hoshi no tenshi On: January 24, 2003 15:56 CST Comment/Review: by the way it's spelled 'yaoi' |
Reviewed By: Warrior Goddess of Insanity On: January 16, 2003 16:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Heehee, That was great! Can't type much right now, but it was really great!.
Zhai'helleva,
Nakago |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 11:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awwww. Poor Davis. I cant wait 4 the next chapter |