| "The Dark Side of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: The watcher On: April 20, 2002 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WRite more ch. this is GRREAT!! AWWWWESOOMME!!
In other words I haven't read one like it in years!! |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: April 06, 2002 06:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to finish it I can't stop thinking about. FINISH IT, IT'S SO COOL!!!!!:) |
Reviewed By: Kinkymalinkie On: February 09, 2002 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story so far! I, personally, have really enjoyed it! Please, do continue to write more! The only thing i could say is to, maybe, go into more detail, but other then that, it's awesome!I can't wait to see what will happen!
-Kinkymalinkie |
Reviewed By: medaea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2002 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i Think this fic has promise but Pan does come across as a self indulgent brat. Come one, she's cold and alone because the others couldn't spar with her once? please. Maybe if it was slightly more traumatic it would make more sense. other than that, it's well written and good grammar. |
Reviewed By: schala-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2002 19:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi there! You've done a great job on this fic so far! Good idea, original! I've been keeping tabs on this one for a while, however...no updates since Oct. 1st! Come now, you wouldn't leave your fans hanging now, would you? *sniff* ....Would you? Looking foreward to a new chapter soon!
*~*Schala-chan*~* |
Reviewed By: Sirus1987 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just one word! AWESOME! Plz finish this asap! It's really neat so far! And I expect no less for the next chapter(s) Anyway, Ciao!
-Sirus1987 |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel On: November 25, 2001 14:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I cant wait any longer i
love this story alot
already and I need
more PLEASEEEEE!! |
Reviewed By: Ane S. Thesia On: August 29, 2001 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwww! One chapter isn't enough! I need to see more damnit! Anyway, i'll keep checking on it to see what you've done....if ya got time, read my DBZ fic i just posted! |
Reviewed By: Ane S. Thesia On: August 29, 2001 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwww! One chapter isn't enough! I need to see more damnit! Anyway, i'll keep checking on it to see what you've done....if ya got time, read my DBZ fic i just posted! |
Reviewed By: Ane S. Thesia On: August 29, 2001 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwww! One chapter isn't enough! I need to see more damnit! Anyway, i'll keep checking on it to see what you've done....if ya got time, read my DBZ fic i just posted! |
Reviewed By: jody On: September 06, 2001 07:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved the story, very good i love these kinds of stories your a really good writer. and belive me coming from me its a honor for me to call anyone a good writer i only say that when i find true talent. if you get to read this i would like to join your mailing list i can't wait to read the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 07, 2001 11:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like your fic so far. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: allie On: October 20, 2001 23:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
dude that is sooooooo awesome! i love it! and i would love it even more if you could put up more on this fic! it rocks!
please e-mail me asap when you do get any more up! thanx and God bless,
allie |
Reviewed By: allie On: October 20, 2001 23:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
oops sorry i forgot to give my e-mail address.
its, saiyanrini13@yahoo.com |
