| "Stimulus" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 17:49 CDT
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ugh!!u need to finish this.....
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Reviewed By: Yae On: July 07, 2005 00:55 CDT
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Hey!!! My comment is MIsSinG!??? Oke... I repeat it. Pleaaaaaaaaaaaase.. please... I implore you... Please continue this masterpiece!! I really love it. For me, you made the story unboring. And I so fond with Youji being suffer^_^ Keep it up!!! Please continue, even its already more than 2years. I really want to know how it will be going.
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Reviewed By: Yae On: July 07, 2005 00:49 CDT
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Reviewed By: Conorgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY am enjoying this fic. PLEAAAAAAAAASE keep updating!!
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Reviewed By: Desdomonda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I know, I could have made the originality rating higher, but as much as I enjoy these fics it HAS been done before, (don't worry I'm guilty as well) but I think the mind wiping is a nice original touch! Keep it up! (and yes finals suck but I had mine last month :P ) |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 24, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter! I like the 'protective/watchful' Aya. ^_^ Omi blabbering on about Aya/Youji and Aya's shoelaces...lol! Now Youji won't remember...hmm, I don't know if that will be good or bad, I'll have to wait and read more! ^_^ I'd rather you finished Stimulus then wrote Habituals.. but it's up to you since you're the one with supreme authoress powers! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Talyssa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 04:27 CST
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hrm. I didn't find chpt 8 all that choppy. Anyway I do like this story so far but I'm a little depressed about it too. Seems like its going to be really really long and full of cliffhangers. >. |
Reviewed By: Talyssa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 04:11 CST
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Enjoying this so far, just wanted to make a quick note: they don't have california rolls in japan (heh....most of the rolls you see in japaense restuarants were created here in america and aren't known there) and its also a bit hard to rearrange sushi so that it looks like you've been eating it. you know.... Anyway, thats no big deal, I just thought I'd point it out. Also, as a general rule, people don't write in present tense much at all. the // you use to indicate a flashback or memory is more than sufficient, personally. The tense changes were somewhat unneeded. But like I said, i'm still really enjoying this. I'll let you know more when I finish the rest of the chapters taht are up |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 18:28 CST
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I think chapter 8 works fine, and not all that choppy. It's good the boys get to realize what they have been missing. Although I still feel sorry for Yoji because I don't know that he knew the others had their time perception scrambled. That would suck for the boy if they thought they just didn't really care, instead of the fact that they just didn't know. |
Reviewed By: Scented Candles On: January 18, 2003 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Glad to see you're in Media Miner as well! :P. This site doesn't have a ban on anything so you can probably explore the torture non-con or whatever gruesome (me likey! :P) scenes your fic will have. You can go into more garish details or whatever and the people who love AyaxYohji and don't visit FF.Net anymore because of the ban will be exposed to your toally spectacular wonderful fic. I hope you update soon cause i am so looking forward to reading it! :P
Great job with your writing! *scented candles hugs Yohji* for some reason i like seeing Yohji as the one getting hurt rather than Aya. i like Aya taking care of Yohji...he he he...! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 00:43 CST
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Hey, great story so far, I can't wait for more. I assume you mean you're implying that Schu is screwing with their minds to confuse them about how long Yohji was gone, and also that the doctors are going to think that they're lovers? That was the impression I got. Anyway, great story! |
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is sooooo cool! Please Please Please write more??? *smiles* I'd really love to read more because I'm realllly interested in seeing what happens next. I'm hoooked so don't leave it to end here! *chuckles* Okay... I should get back to my own writing but I'll come back to check up on this fic! It's really great!(I mentioned that already huh?).
-Rave |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 16:29 CST
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I've been reading this over at ff.net, but I'm glad it's here. As to the "what you were implying." I believe you're implying that Schuldig messed with Ken and Omi's perception of Yoji's abduction. They don't realize that he was taken for as long as he was. They think he was missing for a day (presumably from an all nighter somewhere) rather than tortured by Schwarz for ... I'd have to go back, was it a week?
Of course, I don't know if Aya realized Yoji was gone for that long either. He knows something is bothering Yoji and that the guy is fragile, but I don't know that he realizes just why Yoji is so fragile at the moment.
Excellent story, by the way. And I'm hoping more will be coming soon. |
