"Adornos" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: wow Reviewed By: fanfic fanatic On: October 03, 2003 23:30 CDT Comment/Review: More!! you must continue!! :-)can't speel to save my life..but I know a good thing when I see it :-)
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Reviewed By: Arc [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 13:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Ah, Max? There's something wrong with your chapters. It cuts off the first word of every sentence. It makes for a difficult read. |