| "...if only for tonight... I love you." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Tana_Dairyu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah~!!! --dies-- You need to write more~!!! ^_^ Brad x Aya/Ran fics are rare, and yet oh so good ^_~ I shall wait for an update... soon I hope =P
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Reviewed By: E.C.H.O. On: July 13, 2003 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cackles until she falls over, then stands, wiping a tear away* I did _not_ expect that at the end, and a continuation would be ...intriguing. |
Reviewed By: Suisei Lady Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi there. I read the chapter and it gave goosebumps. Now, why on earth would Brad be in that kind of place??? How did the pimp got him anyway?? He's not someone you just pick up and reduce to submission. You must explain this posting some more chapters (grins) so... I will be waiting for that "interesting" explanation. |
Reviewed By: sanam bevafa On: March 10, 2003 11:03 CST
Comment/Review:
not bad at all |
Reviewed By: Yohji_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! Great start I love it keep wrighting !!
ja |
Reviewed By: Rei Eien On: July 19, 2003 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! *crackles* I so love RxB pairing. ^^ They are rare to find. I am very intrigued as to how Brad managed to be a prositute unless he foresaw Ran going out looking to get laid and arranged it so that Ran would run into the pimp and thus, everything falls into place. ^.~ I hope you will continue this. |
