| "Inside a water bubble" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu-chan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOODNESS!!! This story was fantastic! I was so shocked on how great your english and grammar was! ^___^b You did a wonderful job!!!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 21:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story is AWESOME!!!! and hey you write better english than i do italian. great job.
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Reviewed By: kafeen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is an awsome story!I realy like the fact that you put the english translation beside the japanese words!Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 15:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I think your story is really cool I hope you update soon! plz, plz, plz, Ja ne for now!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story. even now your still getting reviews for your incredible fic. i think u still did a good job being italian, and most likely sexy with that accent.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 23:02 CST
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o, u finished it, srry, I reviewed b4 I finished! @_@ Anyway, great job!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 22:36 CST
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I really like this story! I think your english is better than most americans! (Oh, I'm also italian, born in america) Anyway, update soon, I look forward to it! :)
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Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 22:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! That was so cute! I loved it! And I think you have very good English in your fanfics. Oh... I have to go to bed now, School tomorrow... Mom's mad now... *runs to bed* Really really good fic! I like it! C ya!
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Reviewed By: beater On: December 02, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"passion and love'and 'make me love'
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Reviewed By: miyuki On: June 11, 2003 21:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, konnichi wa means hello and not good morning. good morning is ohayo. i'm japanese so i know. tell me if u need anymore help on vocabulary. great story! i just might read the lemon sequel! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it even though it was short |
Reviewed By: lola4eva On: February 08, 2003 08:19 CST
Comment/Review:
cool. i'm italian too |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 07, 2003 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best! Kagome got her voice back and everything is going happily ever after... This is now one of my top five! Write a sequal!
P.S. - some primarily English speakers have worse grammar than you, it was great! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 06, 2003 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love happy endings!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sniffle*
As for the vote, I would say
"I love you because only you can touch my heart"
or
"make me love"
I am a BIIIIG sucker for love stories!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sammie On: February 06, 2003 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
awwwwww...that wa sweet! i lovvvvve it! yay!
-sammie- |
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