| "Kiranai Hebun-Year One" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: digibitch [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2001 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read some of your fic, to find it's quite interesting. I like the way you explain things, it allows me to understand the story well. However, you need to fix your paragraphs. It'll make things easier to read. This was very creative. You used elements other people wouldn't normally think of, giving it a nice touch. Overall, I like what you've got.
Just post this in the new original fanfiction section as well.
DB
DigiBitch@Team-Rocket.net |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: September 28, 2001 02:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fix the formatting! Centered alignment just isn't proper for a work of prose and it's downright annoying to try to read.
Also, don't waste an entire "chapter" with what's essentially author notes and a synopsis of the backstory. The preview was like a "who cares?" |
Reviewed By: DevonaKH On: September 28, 2001 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, that's nice. I'm glad you don't like the center alignment. I did change it later on, but you know what, I don't care about the earlier format. It's not that big of a deal. The Preview was just like what would be on the back of a book, and it wasn't suppose to thrill you. Why should I care what you have to say if I didn't even read the actual story? |
Reviewed By: Dan On: September 29, 2001 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man, I love KH ^_^ it's really creative in my opinion and has a lot of hillarious parts, and Kiei rules! BOOYAH! |
Reviewed By: =) On: October 21, 2001 13:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey i read this on FF.net and i loved it and am waiting for more chapters to KH year 2! hmm i think the person who gave you the first review is a meanie! |
Reviewed By: DevonaKH On: October 21, 2001 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the nice review! I am working on Part 7 right now, and hopefully it will be done soon. Your review really brightened up my day, thanks ^_^. |
