| "Hello Stranger" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: yp On: March 01, 2003 17:21 CST
Comment/Review:
hey. ok i have to admit that i was rather confused at first. but i just read chapter 2 and that one made sense. so keep up the good work. see ya |
Reviewed By: Aileen On: February 24, 2003 17:07 CST
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Wow! Cool fic! Syaoran is looking for himself, tee-hee! Oh yes, and one more thing.
*lecturing tone*During World War two, Taiwan was taken over by Japan, so depending on the time frame of this story, Li should know Japanese.
Whew! I never thought I'd ever do that!
PS Do you really know mandarin?! Knowing a language is so interesting! I'm working on my spanish at the moment... |
Reviewed By: tesuka- chan On: February 13, 2003 04:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hallo! Well.. I've finally visited this site. I'm not used to it... quite confusing. Oh well. ^_^
About your fiction, well, it's really interesting, lots of humor and stuff. It gives me the idea that the narrator is very... insightful. Hehehe... I like the idea though.
Just some things i'd like to point out. About the pics., don't you think it's kind of impossible not to have at least one? even a baby pic? *scratches head* I mean, there ARE paparazzi's and stuff. And being a VIP is all the more the target of those stuff. Last, well, a little description might be helpful. I sort of couldn't picture it at first but I got it in chapter 1. ^_^ Hey, I meant no offense!
Well, keep it up! write more soon! ja! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Carter Tachikawa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 17:27 CST
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Oooh, finally found of yours to read^^. Thanks for reviewing and emailing me. Cool so far, I can't wait to see the rest. Good job. Keep it up. ~CT |
Reviewed By: The Burning One [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 12:50 CST
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I'm not sure what happened to my earlier review but this was a cool fic and please continue it. |
Reviewed By: The Burning One [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 18:48 CST
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Cool fic...so far :p anyways keep up the good work and update this one soon. |
