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| "Wilderness Survival 101" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: March 13, 2005 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! this was a great story! *laughs* I loved it! I hope that you continue writting stuff like this! Wonderful! te he he i've got the giggles now.. ^^; so yeah, that's all -Krystal-
| Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 29, 2003 05:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOhhhhh,...they FFFinnnnaallyyyyy reunited at last,....*ssssiigghhhhh*...SSSSwwweeetttt,..*grins*....is this the end???...or is there more chappies???...either way,...keep-up the good work,...till next time,...JJaaaaaaaaaa and GGGGGaaaaaanbbbaateeee-NNeeeeee!!^_^!! | Reviewed By: Irish [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 12:32 CST
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Okay yeah Im reviewing my own fic, for any of you who read these. Dude Im soooo sorry! teh spelling was terriable and so was the grammer in this last chapter *hides* And you all are right it was too short, but there is an epilouge coming eventually... no pun intended of course. But hey this was my first Fake fic... Anyway... if there is anyone out there who has a thing for editing I could (obviously) use a hand with my work in that aspect! lol anyway thanks for sticking with me everyone! | Reviewed By: BPurg On: January 28, 2003 06:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree. It was too short! It was just getting realy good! But- I like the ending. n_n Ummmmm very sweet and very nummmy good. Very good. Unique, original, having the two city boys out in the woods is a nice change (not to mention hilarrious poor Dee, he's been going though a lot of pain and torment in fanfics of late. Which is fine- cuz it's waaaaay past his turn IMOP n_n. Heh, Me luv you Dee,...... realy I do.... heh). Merci and Flynn are just awsome. Keep up the good work- I can not express how much I am looking forward to the sequal of Wildefyre's "The Big Desision" fic. n_n | Reviewed By: Enigma's Kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Conculsion, ending! awww, man! *POUT* It was really getting interesting! | Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 22:36 CST
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Wow. You built up a head of steam. I loved your third chapter particularly and of course I'm dying to know what happens next. Thanks. Update soon. The suspense is agonizing. | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 21, 2003 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HHHHHoooobboyyyy,...poor ryo and dee,...bein separated like that,....*sob,sob*...hope everything will turn-out fine for them in the end,....*sssssiiggghhhh*...continue soon kay,...and keep-up the good work,..till yer-next chapter,...JJJaaaaaaaaa and GGaaanbateeee-NNeeeeeee!!^_~!! | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 18, 2003 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYYeeeeeesssss,...this fic is GGGreeeattttt,....it's good to see dee and ryo in a diff enviroment for once,...it's VVeeeeryyyyy intresting and funny,.....*snicker*...the only down-side to it all is how Daaaaamnnn BBBiitcchhyyy that lil bitch mercy is towards dee,...[sorry if i sounds like i'm bashing yer-OC,..just that dee is MMyyy Baabyyy,..*grins*]...AAhhemmm,...all in all,..a VVVeeeryyy good dee+ryo fic,...and i LLLoooooveeee it,...the lemon scene is quite HHHooooottt,..and YYYYuuuuuummyyy,...*drool*...keep-up the good work kay,...and continue soon,...till yer-next chapter,...JJJaaaaaaa and GGannbbaateee-NNeeeeeee!!^_~!! | Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 05:50 CST
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This story just keeps getting better and better... Thank God Dee is okay though. Oh and that little lemon scene was simply delicious!
Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait to see the completed version of the 3rd chapter! | Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 05:39 CST
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I love this story!! Having Ryo and Dee out of their elements is a nice change of pace. Dee is hilarious and Ryo, the poor guy is trying so hard... Oh and Merci and Flynn are just the coolest! Keep up the great work! |
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