| "Captivation" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
| Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: February 20, 2003 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, this is a long, involved story, but an excellant read. Now that I'm invested in these characters, I hope for a sappy, happy ending. |
Reviewed By: Seth On: February 16, 2003 10:14 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm agreeing with everyone. Why the heck did Relena let Une come stay with her? Sure, she's sane now, but will that last? Heero thinks she's guilty, so he's going to blow his gasket. |
Reviewed By: brian On: February 13, 2003 15:07 CST
Comment/Review:
*whew* Finally can breath now that you've updated!
Love Relena but Heero's going to kill her when he gets back. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 13, 2003 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Une redemption was a nice touch. Without Trieze she's pretty sane and cool. Nice chapter. Waiting for the fur to fly when Heero comes back. |
Reviewed By: Carrie "AngelBaby" M. On: February 13, 2003 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still hate historical romance but this is not bad for a romantic epic type story. I usually don't like them but this is kind of good. Heero and Relena's relationship is what got me interested. |
Reviewed By: no pen name On: February 14, 2003 07:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Glad to see Une all normal and the hint of Trowa liking her was sweet. Though Relena's kindness toward her looks like it'll backfire on her w/ Heero. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: February 14, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Roads looking a little rocky for Relena and Heero, huh? No! |
Reviewed By: Chun Li On: February 06, 2003 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Why did you do that Relena ? Why, girl? Are you crazy? Writing gets better and better. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: February 05, 2003 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's probabl going to be hell to pay for Relena when Heero gets back. I'm starting to think Une isn't the psycho I thought she was. |
Reviewed By: Carrie "AngelBaby" M. On: January 30, 2003 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I normally hate historical romances and the dialogue. Well, I still do. but I do like your fic. |
Reviewed By: Perry D. On: January 30, 2003 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so Heero is serious about Relena and Dr. Jaye thinks she's trouble. Well, like Heero said if he had to choose it wouldn't be the Dr.! |
Reviewed By: Chun Li On: January 30, 2003 07:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, Heero's defending his girls honor. Dr. Jayne sounds like a jerk. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Cassie On: January 29, 2003 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Heero and Relena will finally get together, right? And soon I hope. LOL. |
Reviewed By: purple rain On: January 26, 2003 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Got nothing to say except keep pushing out terrific chapters... |
Reviewed By: LisaAndrew On: January 25, 2003 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your verson of Wufei is slightly more likable than the series. But he's cool either way. |
| Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
