| "Captivation" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: no pen name On: February 25, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good, good good. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Cleao On: February 25, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo and Hilde are perfect. Bring back Hilde's scary father! He's a riot. Feeling bad for Relena. Everyone's leaving her and when Heero gets back...uh, oh. |
Reviewed By: Perry D. On: February 25, 2003 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is soooooo cute! This chapter had a lot of stuff going on and was real good. I'll be sad to see Wufei go. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: February 25, 2003 08:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Wahhhh! Wufei's gone! My life is over! ANYWAY, at least he's with Sally. I was hoping you end them up together some way. Duo and Hilde are as cute as ever. Poor Relena all alone. =( |
Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: February 22, 2003 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
ENJOYABLE CHAPTER. I JUST DON'T KNOW HOW IN THE HECK SALLY COULD PASS FOR A MAN! WILL THERE BE A ROMANCE WITH HER AND WUFEI? |
Reviewed By: Seth On: February 22, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sally pretending to be a man and getting away with it. Cool. Why does she want Relena to talk to Wufei? What are you doing to Wufei? |
Reviewed By: brian On: February 22, 2003 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice update, but kind of dull with just Quatre and Relena going on about love and stuff. Still an good story, but I'm more interested in the Relena/Heero elements. The Dr."Barry" converstion was much more involving. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 22, 2003 12:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Good fic with a very engaging storyline. And most of all, Relena's not annoyingly clingy like most fics portray her. Hey, I like the girl and I hate reading stuff that has her as a pain in the ass. This doesn't. |
Reviewed By: LisaAndrew On: February 22, 2003 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I haven't reviewed in a while. Just plain lazy. I give this all 10's for super cuteness and the Quatre appeal. He's just so CUTE! |
Reviewed By: Cleao On: February 21, 2003 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be short and sweet. I likey. Gee, I WONDER who Quatre loves? Yeah, right. That's about it. -_~ |
Reviewed By: no pen name On: February 21, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem to be a big fan of H/R like the rest of us, but how about a request? How about writing seperate romances for the rest of the characters? Like Trowa and Une! Sorry, I'm obsessed with that pairing. |
Reviewed By: Carrie "AngelBaby" M. On: February 21, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Missing Heero and Relena interaction! It was funny how scared Quatre was Relena was in love with him. I'm a militant pro-Heero/Relena fan, but I could go for an alternative pairing of Quatre and Relena. That would be different. |
Reviewed By: Perry D. On: February 20, 2003 22:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Relena's the little miracle worker, isn't she? HA! And I thought the part with her and Quatre was good. Just can't see him with Dorothy sometimes. Hurts my head to think about it. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: February 20, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quatre in love with Dorothy? Awwww. Sweet! Nice to have a loving moment before the s*** hits the fan between Heero and Relena. |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: February 20, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dorsble scene with Quatre and Relean when he thought she loved him. Q's in love with Dorothy, right? Scary...but sweet! |
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