"A Time For Love, No Time For Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 17, 2003 17:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hehehehehehehehehheheheh, stupid me. You're going to be one of those writers that never update, huh? I should have known better. Well, update soon, cause it is a great start. Please update soon. Arigatou.
Ja ne
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 15, 2003 17:08 CDT Comment/Review: O, and yes, I reviewed again today cause' I decided to re-read the story. It really is a great start.
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 15, 2003 17:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW. Great fiction. Don't be crazy. I also support you 100% on the idea, so, please update soon. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Ja ne'
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 15, 2003 13:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey, tis a GREAT fic. Update soon, so you don't keep us readers awaiting, okay? I see my friend Saiyan Princess has submitted a review. Just to warn you now, she has little patients. I would also like to appoligize for any future rudeness. Heh heh heh, she's going to kill me in our next sparring session,(she hates when I appoligize for her), and knowing our sensi, he'll let her. Anyways, great fic. Update soon.
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 10, 2003 22:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Not good? Not good? That was great! I want more. Update as soon as possible, okay? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Common, you're making a Saiyan beg! Update!
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: v son sayian On: May 11, 2003 20:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hehehehe. a good idea i love it tru is one of my fav charcters i wonder what will happen wink wink nudge nudge get the next chappy up. |
Reviewed By: YunaAngelOfHell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 19:53 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: great story! update soon! ps: no offense, but i think you're going a lil bit too fast |
Reviewed By: k-chan On: February 01, 2003 10:14 CST Comment/Review: I liked it! update soon ok?? |
Reviewed By: Jupiter_goddess24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 17:58 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I just felt like clicking on tens, your stories are usually good so i decided to review it before i read it, lol
Hehe, i like purple!
bai
-sailor jupiter! (jennifer) |
Reviewed By: Meesa On: January 27, 2003 17:57 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omigawd! like, great story. hurry up with the next chapter!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hostile Pan-chan On: January 27, 2003 07:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: That was a great chapter! I love your "Moving furniture" thing. Well, get a new chappy up soon! |
Reviewed By: bran On: January 26, 2003 21:19 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great fic!!!
Please update soon! whoose kayla parents?? (just woundering) |
Reviewed By: bran.chan On: January 18, 2003 21:01 CST Comment/Review: I love your idea of a fic!! I think you should go ahead and write the story! Please!!!!!!!!!
I support you 100% on the idea!
BRAN |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 09:48 CST Comment/Review: great some what funny and who is tru!? oh well i like it!? |
Reviewed By: Dragon_Mistress On: February 09, 2003 16:18 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: this is great
write more and longer |