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| "Of Pointed Ears and Dancing Fairylight" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Shriek and Lynx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! I am tired (but not tired enough to sleep), my brother is asleep, and the last thing I need is a damned cliffhanger! I'm practically hyperventilating, wondering what the hell is going to happen to Yami and Yugi!
I love your writing style. Though, I was a bit confused at the beginning, but I eventually got everything. I was so not prepared for the whole decaying-hands-popping-out part. I expected, like, a Gargoyle or something to pop out and eat them. -_- And (gasp!) you split up the runts! How could you?! That's so... evil!
Well, I expect this review is not helpful to you in the least (did that make sense?). But, now I am tired enough to sleep, so I will do so. Next time I visit this story, I expect an update! ^.^
-- Shriek | Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: February 13, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: *eyes wide* ...
SilentDarkness: *slips "Of Pointed Ears and Dancing fairylight" off of the printer table and ties a peice of yarn around it* Aibou?
BleedingAngel: *blank stare* ... this... is... *explodes* AMAZING!! I can't believe only one person has reviewed! Your writing talent is impeccable! I love the way you describe Yami's musings! The way you represent their appearance is WOW! I mean, I'm nearly speechless! O_O
SilentDarkness: and, I propose that's as close as I'm ever going to get to silence. I cherish these moments. Well done and Thank you, Nozomi Aru.
BleedingAngel: Yami, you're so mean to me :p *clears her throat* Anywho, This was incredible! ^_^ Please, right more!
SilentDarkness: we're captivated. *firm nod*
BleedingAngel: hai hai! Hell, I even printed your fanfiction out! *holds up papers* see? see? Pwease, be nice and continue? ;-; | Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 01:22 CST
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Aaaah, not the puppy dog eyes! ;) Seriously, though, very interesting start and looking forward to finding out how it all turns out in the end. | Reviewed By: Silver Dragon On: March 23, 2003 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more, please. Really well done, I think. You're doin' great so far. |
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